I Won't Give In

[Tash8]

[Intro - Tash8]
Yo, I'll bet you guys have felt something like I always seem to be feeling

There's always a time in a person's when they feel like they got no one to hold them up
when they feel like they about to collapse,
and your friends would rather mock you about it than help you get through it
they feel the neccesity to laughter is to make you feel worse than a pile of shit

[Verse 1 - Tash8]
Yo, fuck friendship and all the shit between
Oh, and thank you all for slitting my dreams
So, you'll annoy me by getting me steamed
Like you push me in the oven
So you'll see how much I'm sweating in heat
And you would use me as your heat measure
As I burn I contribute to your sweet pleasure
You'd mock me like your some fucking parrot
Now you done it what u want a fucking merit?
I'm a slave to your kingdom like I do the work
And you sit back on your ass like homer simpson
I try past my abilities to sustain our friendship
Before the sudden stop to drain and end shit
I try, but you keep giving me this ant feeling
I'm haulin 'hind u with my bike, when i catch up
U turn around squash me and turn me to ketchup

[Chorus X2 - Tash8]
I try, but I don't know why
cause I'm sick of you and all your disguise
keep playing with mind
torturing me with jokes and all these lies

[Verse 2 - Tash8]
If an abrupt attack hits me and I fall on my head
Would you stop your task, and calm me instead?
Or would you operate like nothing has happened?
Because to you it's not even an existence matter
Like ur across the bridge and its just distance chatter
And if you ain't giving in then I wont given either
Fuck you, you, you and you -------------------
You claim I piss you off with my negative talks
You fuckers know I do shit just to egg you off
Go ahead keep talking trash behind my back

[Chorus X2 - Tash8]
I try, but I don't know why
cause I'm sick of you and all your disguise
keep playing with mind
torturing me with jokes and all these lies

[Enimee]

good job

[Rain Matrix]

keep at it, write what u feel, not cuz u feel like writing

[Tash8]

upping?

[Tash8]

one last bump before i go on my trip

[Tash8]

upping?

[stevethetruth]

yo i'll leave some feed tomorrow just remind me

[James R.]

Got some nice emotion going on in here. And I have to disagree with Rain. Writing what you feel is amazing and it makes for the best writing, but if you feel like writing then drop w/e because the results will still be up to par. There are times when you know what you feel but don't feel like writing, they go hand in hand. Flow was nice and the topic was good. The intro wasn't necessary but it prepared me for the song so jolly good show ol' chap. But yeah keep it up homie.

[CaptivatingVokalz]

i loved reading this right now cause i just went through a fucked up friendship... and it really hit the spot for me. these days there's no such thing as a friend/supporter... i love the first verse... oh and thank you all for slittin my dreams etc...

[Tash8]

i loved reading this right now cause i just went through a fucked up friendship... and it really hit the spot for me. these days there's no such thing as a friend/supporter... i love the first verse... oh and thank you all for slittin my dreams etc...

yea shit like that happens all the time.. and gotta write what i feel

thx for feed

[C-Game]

yea everythin was oki tash.. it was simple but full of meaning

I'm haulin 'hind u with my bike, when i catch up
U turn around squash me and turn me to ketchup

good two lines there