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Weird Wacky Ways We Write When Wisdom's Wide

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Weird Wacky Ways We Write When Wisdom's Wide

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 23rd, '07, 18:49

im a soldier, so just hold your composure before i fully expose ya
ya know that there's gonna be war without warnin
then no more apposers cuz your stories are over
i'll encore them when ya try to record
cuz you formed in this forum a foreign origin

go forfeit explorin fortune cuz you're an orphan
you should've aborted, cut off your cord
at our headquarters often reportin importance is supported
while you're destroyin by distortion
blowin the portrait outta proportion

you'll undoubtly get tortured, call that torment
you oughtta see my horrors:
an odyssey mortared periodically
you'd enjoy honestly, your coordinates
cuz mine does seem abnormally ordered

sometimes I dream I'm immortal
but I gotta see a new portal
what sign's to read or's it a sorta
thing my mind must lead thru these corners?

please cease the mournin
decrease the caution
impeach the boss
and teach good morals
proceed a chorus to keep the course on
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Weird Wacky Ways We Write When Wisdom's Wide

Postby CaptivatingVokalz » Jul 23rd, '07, 21:24

YAYYY wonderfulllll writing! this awakened my thoughts... each line kept the ball rollin... it definitely exceeds the average writing system and surpassed "simple" i love writings like these that make you go back and re-read what you "thought" you just read and sort of get a different meaning out of it every time. great job on challenging my thought process :y:
*~Vokally Blessed Kristen~*
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Re: Weird Wacky Ways We Write When Wisdom's Wide

Postby 4D » Jul 23rd, '07, 23:11

Very poetic writing man, I enjoyed that a lot. You just summed up the meaning of creative wriitng. Didn't seem like you were burdened by rules or the need for perfect structure, or the neccessity to be overly complex and force multies. Just very interesting word use, great flow and rhythm to the lines, and not boring for a second. And I liked the structure, it was different and cool.
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Re: Weird Wacky Ways We Write When Wisdom's Wide

Postby Flamez » Jul 24th, '07, 00:53

i loved this man, everything was great :y: :8)
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