A story in rhymes

[IceAxe]

good story. very well told with some good imagery. Nothin negative to say about it really.

Good work

ya gonna do audio for it?

[Rain Matrix]

passion and emotion are 2 of tha things that give rap is depth, keep chipping away this wuz good

[James R.]

You asshole I was gonna do a father daughter storyline once I finished commenting in the creative writing section lol. This was good man I really enjoyed it. The rhyming was simple but that's exactly what this song needed and the emotion made it all the better. Keep it up man

[Tash8]

^ what he said

but fuck that, go record it, NOW, you hear me!?

[Flamez]

that was a good story you told man loved it

[CaptivatingVokalz]

I liked this story line a lot... nice twist at the end! I was like "where the fuck is his daughter?" lol