New New Shit.

[James R.]

I was livin a dream baby, 16 and in love/
I miss watchin walk, switch cleaner than doves/
I bragged about you every single chance that I got/
I knew you would love me if I was handsome or not/
Used to love talking to you til dawn every morning/
I loved you girl I still play our song when I’m mourning/
I can’t believe your life had to be taken so slowly/
And I can’t believe the killer had kept me awake just to show me/
I tried to stop him I did I loved you more than life/
Shut the fuck up you pussy now she’s touchin on my knife/
You think she was your girl she fuckin the whole city/
You should know yourself you were stuck in the hole with me/
Wake the fuck up asshole, fine just sit and wonder why/
I can finally fuckin see why she kissed another guy/
She messed up playboy and I did your ass some justice/
Maybe if you would listen then you would understand… FUCK THIS/
I didn’t ask your for shit you fuckin bastard your sick/
I found out she cheated I told you I could manage with it/
But you couldn’t stop and look at all the damage you did/
I come to find that you were beatin her with hammers and shit/
So she made a mistake Michael, big fuckin deal/
And what did you do? Help? WOW! NOW WE’RE STUCK IN JAIL/
This aint a fuckin game Mike it’s fuckin real/
Shut up Jason do you want to get US fuckin killed?/
And could you stop the yelling and screaming maybe?/
They don’t know what happened and you sound like you’re crazy/
You know what they say no body no evidence/
And you have to admit I did this with such elegance/
And plus you shouldn’t worry these attorneys never win/
And I doubt any girl will put you through hell again/
Besides what ever happened to bros before hos?/
I said fuck it whenever you broke my girl’s nose/
You do all this shit and I always catch the blame for it/
I got something for your ass Mike, you just wait for it/
Oh now you’re the big man? Stuck in jail for a bitch/
Actually asshole I’m stuck in jail cuz you’re sick/
You weren’t sayin this when I beat up those bullies for you/
Yeah before you beat girls… so what if I beat on whore’s too/
All I did was protect you… But I didn’t need your protection/
When I look into a mirror I can see your reflection/
You need to back off I don’t want you ruling me/
HAHA! You can’t shove me off you’re not fooling me/
This is lunacy what the fuck could you do to me?/
I guess you’ll just find out when they’re sayin my eulogy/
If anybody should rule it’s me and if I can’t then it’s over/
What? What are you doin with that razor blade Jason hold up/
What’s wrong? Scared of the other side of the knife Mike?
So this is what taking somebody’s life’s like/

Hello Judge Morris I’m district attorney Anderson/
I had to do a report on the case I’m here to hand it in/
But I just got a call that’s make it kind of pointless/
The boy is about to go in for an autopsy appointment/
Yeah I know calm down, they said he swallowed a razor/
Choked on his own blood but this is what’s even stranger/
They said he killed his girlfriend by slitting her throat/
He threw up his own blood and look what he wrote/
I did it but I didn’t Michael’s the one that made me/
I want you all to know that I’m sorry, I’m not crazy/

Not sure if I delivered this right but he's supposed to be having like mutliple personality thing going on. First time I tried to write something like this so I'm just kinda hoping for the best here lol. Tell me what you think

[joelle]

awesome delivery, topic, idea, flow, rhyming, etc.

But you shouldve put some of the stuff in italics like it used to be so it's not confusing.

You rock Jam

[James R.]

shit I forgot to do that. I meant to. I'll do it now.

[joelle]

much better

[James R.]

Hmmm... maybe someone could feed or something?

[Rain Matrix]

nice drop, but this murder shot isn't very appealing 2 me