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My pen is magic

Postby xariuss » Nov 7th, '05, 03:44

My pen is magic
Your death is tagic
your breath.. i have it
Swrapped in plastic
sufficating because of your drastic lashes
of suicidal hints and self hurting rashes
I'm more mystic then your whole past is
I'm flabbergasted,
by these 2 drinks and acid..
Sombody has to get it
i got 2 screws inbedded
i don't know if there screws or 2 ledded
bullets, i got a full clip
to earse any of this bullshit
which has me in a depressed mood of drug trips
You ain't tough bitch
i've had enough shit
You won't ever catch me trying to bluff it
i am what i say i am and i love it...
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 7th, '05, 03:49

damn. i liked that one. it was great. you should batle someone.
keep up the rhymes
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Postby Inzanity » Nov 7th, '05, 04:22

that was hot. I liked it.
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Postby ines » Nov 7th, '05, 13:42

very nice
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Postby Prisoner » Nov 7th, '05, 13:46

I like it man, where r u from?
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Postby $0 R3@L » Nov 7th, '05, 13:51

some heavy shit man....wanna put it in audio for the tr shady mixtape?
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Postby xariuss » Nov 8th, '05, 05:33

thanks for the replies, im from australia... hip hop is really starting to move here:).. well i don't have the typical Australian acient seeing as my family is American influenced... but yeah anyways i'd love to do some mixtape shit ey... that'd be hot, and looks like a portal of some fresh material.. people posting audio instead of lyrics... fuck that would get shit moving.. and make it fresh
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Postby detroit_prince313 » Dec 3rd, '05, 20:29

That was pretty good...yo i like the first apart bout the pen bein magic, yo death is tragic
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Postby Trigger » Dec 4th, '05, 00:06

heyyy xariuss i like ur attitude, good shit by the way, pateinilty waiting 4 the audio :D
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Postby xariuss » Dec 4th, '05, 00:33

thanks man ^^
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Postby xariuss » Dec 5th, '05, 07:56

ill audio it for yas... but at this moment, like right now.. im workin on a song which i shud post up tomorrow, its finished and all, but i need to rapp it on the beat.. but moms friends are over and yeah it's abit awakard, there like pop song loving hippies, but yeah a "full song" :)
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Postby Trigger » Dec 8th, '05, 04:21

ight yo, lookin 4 ward to it :D
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Postby shadysoldiergrl » Dec 8th, '05, 04:49

i lyk thys one!
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