The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Freestyle

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Vote

Poll ended at Aug 6th, '07, 23:07

1st Freestyle
0
No votes
2nd Freestyle
1
10%
Don't Know/Don't Answer
4
40%
--------------------------
0
No votes
You getting better
0
No votes
You getting worse
1
10%
Don't Know/Don't Answer
4
40%
 
Total votes : 10

Freestyle

Postby Kojack » Aug 1st, '07, 23:07

Made these 2 Freestyle just to know if i'm getting better or getting worse, Choose.

---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Voting Rules

From the List you can choose two Options
Above the line Only one
Below the line Only one

p.s the vote you saw already is mine it's D.K/D.A

---------------------------------------------------------------------------

I'm so Fly Beat

Yo, Remember that little Kid who Just tried to Get ya
Have a Relationship with you, and went in heaven
"Where are you, i tried find you..."
Two shots and all comes black, still can die for you
Remember me?, i almost got beat down
Still got the bruise in my eye, you ain't here now
you laught behind my back, i felt like an Asshole
when your homies found me, bitch i had the teflon, Strapped on
And Shit don't make sense, i'll get that catching flow
when you bitches fall in love with me, I use to Feel like i'm alone

SHIIIT

---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Certified Gangstas Beat

I shoot bitches out when Compton bein' layin' on my feet
i'm Sicilia mothafucka nobody can fuck wit me
Got the Tommy Locked and Load, somebody gon die
I Don't know who is he, Cause i'm really really high
Wearin' G6's, i Shoot them Snitches
Big Kojack has all the High Rank Bitches
I Don't Care if your ass Itches
I'll kick him, cause you faggot call your 56's
You know enough about me, but you can't do a move
cause you know what is gonn happen, if you tell the truth
Now, you see me rollin, with my Tommy Gun Homies
Don't wanna fuck wit my team, cause it will be your last joy

---------------------------------------------------------------------------
History

First Freestyle
I Had a Dream for a girl, That Girl was the beautifulest in my school and i loved her
I got shot for her, i got beaten down for her, all this by her Boyfriend, that's all.

Second Freestyle
It was just a freestyle i wanted write it down and i want your opinion

---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Explanations

"I'm Sicilia" I Rep Sicilia
"...call your 56's" That guy has 56 men for his Personal Protection
"...Compton bein' layin' on my feet" Compton is an Afternoon Coffee for me
"Big Kojack Has all the HIgh Rank Bitches" I got the Best Bitches in the world
"...tell the truth" I got a short sight, my sister is a lesbo and is men beat me up
Last edited by Kojack on Aug 4th, '07, 00:43, edited 2 times in total.
Image
My name is Rickie and i got a Dickie. My name is Buck and im here to fuck.
User avatar
Kojack
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1649
Joined: Sep 22nd, '06, 22:27
Location: Crosstown Heights
Gender: Male

Re: Freestyle

Postby Wallace » Aug 3rd, '07, 20:20

The second freestyle was better, and I voted "Don't know/Don't answer" in teh second option cuz It's the first rhymes I read from U.
User avatar
Wallace
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1336
Joined: Jun 8th, '07, 03:19
Gender: Male

Re: Freestyle

Postby Kojack » Aug 4th, '07, 00:44

Topic Announcement : Vote Again, Some Modifications took place and I need you to vote again
Last edited by Kojack on Aug 4th, '07, 00:52, edited 1 time in total.
Image
My name is Rickie and i got a Dickie. My name is Buck and im here to fuck.
User avatar
Kojack
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1649
Joined: Sep 22nd, '06, 22:27
Location: Crosstown Heights
Gender: Male

Re: Freestyle

Postby Tash8 » Aug 4th, '07, 00:48

Kojack wrote:Topic Announcement : Vote Again, Some Modifications took place and we need you to vote again


you and ur tiny dick don't count as WE.
User avatar
Tash8
Addict
Addict
 
Posts: 12522
Joined: Feb 19th, '07, 20:04
Gender: Male

Re: Freestyle

Postby Kojack » Aug 4th, '07, 00:52

Kojack wrote:Topic Announcement : Vote Again, Some Modifications took place and I need you to vote again
Image
My name is Rickie and i got a Dickie. My name is Buck and im here to fuck.
User avatar
Kojack
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1649
Joined: Sep 22nd, '06, 22:27
Location: Crosstown Heights
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron