Quick free stlye for fun: wht ya think???

[Aft3rmath]

One shot ya down/
signs of life not found/
ya lay dying on the ground/
load'n the next round/
now who's the clown/
just turn around and face da facts/
I bout to erase your past/
present and future, forever ur ass is grass/
look to da sky cause ya lifes outta gas/
cry a little maybe god will sigh a little/
and spare your uselessness on this earth so you can die old and brittle/
suffer bitch lay on da ground/
thats the gun shot, oh and that sound/
its ya brains all over the pavement all spread out/

[Kojack]

Inconsistent.

[baller4life]

It's ok, i guess.

[Requiem]

interesting concept,
up to ur house i crept,
murdered ur family while u slept,
now u have to accept
that ur alone with no loved ones left,
i took away everything u had, like the IRS

[baller4life]

interesting concept,
up to ur house i crept,
murdered ur family while u slept,
now u have to accept
that ur alone with no loved ones left,
i took away everything u had, like the IRS

Pretty good.

[James R.]

Average at best. very simplistic. flow was up and down like a 60's impala