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Too Many Mistakes

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Too Many Mistakes

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 10th, '07, 04:42

too many mistakes are being made
n we aint getting any breaks
so we face stress everyday
at this place I can't rest as I wait
for my next case they create
to progress for a fate where we're safe
or a mess could be raised

the effects really change
how I act, it is strange
but this fact I must state
and the impact's very great,
cuz I could collapse when my strength's
put to the max in this maze,
cuz at the lab I am dazed
but my plan's not a waste
cuz no man can erase
what I stand for,
here's my chance to update:

advancin my traits
platformed to gravitate
my craft more to educate
or a bad storm in my brain
just may activate
and then the terrain I'll agrivate
as my traits factor a great
disaster, can you imagine it?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Too Many Mistakes

Postby baller4life » Aug 10th, '07, 04:52

Pretty good. :y:
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