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Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 13th, '07, 02:18

i'll admit that my outlet in hip
hop does give me an uplift in how i live

but i've never been counterfeit with all my hits
a lyricist i'd call a gift, im talented, i know my risks

and im not about to quit n ball my fists
b/c i've found my niche, i saw the glitch

and then i challenged it and ever since
from the amount of hints i grounded this

or powerless i would end, that's cowardness my friend
i was in no tolerance to send myself out to our bench

im bound for trips around, not fenced in walled limits
so now im proud i'm rich and problemless

it sounds a wish, no well could dish
oh well i wont miss the hell which got pitched

to my realm, which you missed
can anyone tell how i flipped?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: outlet is hip hop

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '07, 02:19

do you feed others at all or just expect feedback cuz ur superman? correct me if i'm wrong
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Re: outlet is hip hop

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 02:22

Tash8 wrote:do you feed others at all or just expect feedback cuz ur superman? correct me if i'm wrong


He superman?
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Re: outlet is hip hop

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 13th, '07, 02:30

i feed when i like something i believe needs to be recognized b/c its worth looking at

decypher written code

transmit random frequencies

omit forbidden truth
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: outlet is hip hop

Postby Tash8 » Aug 13th, '07, 02:33

aite, well sorry to say but then to me this ain't worth recognition or feed.
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Re: outlet is hip hop

Postby Kojack » Aug 13th, '07, 02:41

Kaotic wrote:i feed when i like something i believe needs to be recognized b/c its worth looking at

decypher written code

transmit random frequencies

omit forbidden truth


Yeah well i feel u on the first thing, guess thats why u aint giving feedback to ur own shit.

All this written code bullshit u speaking aint exist. Poetry of that kind lived a dozen generations ago, now we 2007, thats 3rd millenium. No need for codes. No need for making up shit either. If you want your name in history like Homer, Shakespeare, Euripides, Plautus or Eric Burdon, you gotta create sumthin unique and new, and there is no such thing. The invention of hip hop and trance music just killed the possibility of anything new to be created.

We dont want random frequencies, they fuck up the signal. And you know pretty much shit about frequencies, thats the literal part. Now as a metaphor, still why would anyone want something random?? Fuck if i want something random i'll call Angie.

There is no forbidden truth, matta fact there is no truth. Eat, drink, fuck, kill, shit, steal to have and praise ya ass, till ya get 50 year old. Thats the truth. Yep that is. Truth is if you get money u rule, if you dont u get ruled and no bullshit can change that.
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Re: outlet is hip hop

Postby James R. » Aug 13th, '07, 07:01

Not feelin it. Too simple. Sounds like some jeezy shit to me.
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