i aint wana (kojak diss) may be not dope shit?

[4D]

Baller4Life, I appreciate you posting this, it was an interesting read, but it's just a freestyle tutorial copied from another forum or site. If you're gonna reply to somebody's post and use constructive criticism, use your own, don't condescend on somebody by posting a tutorial. This is not a section called "freestyles" it's creative writing, so more or less everything in that piece you posted is irrelevant.

That been said, J-Roc you need to work on your structure big time, lay out was really bad, you had some okay multies and one or two personals but you should really make a better effort if you're gonna diss somebody. You need to be perfect yourself, but you're verse just looks messy and amateurish. Tighten it up next time, edit it to improve structure and flow, and you will garner better feedback. Keep it up man!

[baller4life]

Baller4Life, I appreciate you posting this, it was an interesting read, but it's just a freestyle tutorial copied from another forum or site. If you're gonna reply to somebody's post and use constructive criticism, use your own, don't condescend on somebody by posting a tutorial. This is not a section called "freestyles" it's creative writing, so more or less everything in that piece you posted is irrelevant.

Ok sorry, I will post something different next time.

[Kojack]

no no no, you helped this guy a bit

[shady4life!]

u guys r haters, all of u. Wat that guy wrote was okay, but nobody said anythin to compliment. Oh well i'll be the first. Good Job.it wasnt as bad as everybody made it sound but it wasnt perfect either. Work at it .

[Kojack]

u guys r haters, all of u. Wat that guy wrote was okay, but nobody said anythin to compliment. Oh well i'll be the first. Good Job.it wasnt as bad as everybody made it sound but it wasnt perfect either. Work at it .

Tried to diss me

[J Roc]

u guys r haters, all of u. Wat that guy wrote was okay, but nobody said anythin to compliment. Oh well i'll be the first. Good Job.it wasnt as bad as everybody made it sound but it wasnt perfect either. Work at it .

Tried to diss me

haha kojack...i was half asleep...and that was awhile ago...and its still better then all of ya dropps...put together

@Shady4life--thanks

[Kojack]

[Greece Lightning]

great one haha.blakas kojak

[Kojack]

Ante gamisou emathes dyo lekseis ellinika kai kati egine, zoo.