keyed this up a while back

[stevethetruth]

the way you make me feel
it's almost like unreal
it's the little things you do
that got me going crazy for you


it's funny when we went our separate ways
sure we're friends but we always had perfect days
we never sat around argued yelled or fought
i never woulda opened up if hell was sought
i thought things would be like one fairy tale
now so pale and you'd know i'd never hit no female
when i breathe i exhale my thoughts for you
and you left me blue, down, i thought how could you?
leave me here in my despair all alone
shivering in the cold can't help but think what i had was gold

[baller4life]

Decent.

[stevethetruth]

thanks

[James R.]

Not a bad read man. It's short and I think you could expand it into a full song and have it be a pretty ill piece. You had some nice multies in there too. Only thing I'd say is make sure you keep that flow tight man. It got a little choppy near the end.

[stevethetruth]

thanks for the feedback man

[baller4life]

:worship: thanks for the feedback man

Anytime.

[Rain Matrix]

I'm all 4 any flow that has 2 do with those ho's and what they can do 2 us males