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Show Me What You Got

Postby James R. » Aug 16th, '07, 03:38

(Chorus/Hook)
Show me what you got young jeezy
Show me what you got lil weezy
Show me what you got new drops
Show you what I got 2Pac

Hands up it’s James (show em what you got)
It’s James (show em what you got)
It’s James (show em what you got)
It’s James (show em what you got)

(Verse 1)
Word to proof dog
I already swerved for 2pac, I need new stock
Standin up when the old rhymers sittin down
Got the skill to rule but no time to get it out
Get my name out ya mouth boy spit it out
Cuz when I counter it’s nothing you forget about
I’m 17 with more wisdom than the old school
Change the game if you give em what I told you
You can blame Nas for inspiring the blood hound
Call me rap police retiring the thugs now
Bomb Atlanta delighted that it’s shut down
Me and Jay flow united we could flood towns
I’m fly but decided I should touch ground
Skill expected like Unitas throwin touchdowns
Every now and then the new kid gotta win
And unfortunately for you I’m him

(Chorus/Hook)

(Verse 2)
H-I-P hop
I aint signed yet but I’m still on top
I think I’m smtn like the rap lebron james
1st round draft pick y’all playin the wrong game
You can call this hip hop affirmative action
Promotin trash so nasty returned wit a passion
You didn’t know my name when you heard of me passin
I’m comin at the labels who herded the trash in
I aint sayin I’m the best but I’m better than y’all
Im far from a rookie I’m a veteran dog
If it wasn’t real you shouldn’t have said it at all
All this pop star rappers I ain’t letting you off
East coast squeeze close show me what you got
West side lets ride show me what you got
Dirty south work it out show me what you got
Mid west get dressed show me what you got

(Chorus/Hook)
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby joelle » Aug 16th, '07, 03:50

(yep, you guessed it)
You rock Jam.
Have a pressie: :devil:
YES! you see correctly! a little purple devil! You lucky bastard you.
Yes, we can.
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby J Won » Aug 16th, '07, 03:55

Nice flow & word play :y:
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby IceAxe » Aug 16th, '07, 03:56

It was pretty tight. Had some good multis and the flow was solid in the verses. The flow in the chorus was kinda strange, but that's probably cuz it's text.

Good work :y: Hope to hear some audio from ya soon
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby James R. » Aug 16th, '07, 03:59

Yeah the flow in this song doesn't transfer to text well. Really I'm just tryin to get a mass of lyrics down with beats so that when i finally can record I won't be short for material.

(Chorus/Hook)
Show me what you got young jeezy
Show me what you got lil weezy
Show me what you got new drops
Show you what I got 2Pac

Hands up it’s James (show em what you got)
It’s James (show em what you got)
It’s James (show em what you got)
It’s James (show em what you got)

the (show em what you got) isn't something that I'd actually be saying, if you listen to the actual song you hear it in the back ground. It reads almost exactly the same as the hook jay does.
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby J Won » Aug 16th, '07, 04:05

James R. wrote:the (show em what you got) isn't something that I'd actually be saying, if you listen to the actual song you hear it in the back ground. It reads almost exactly the same as the hook jay does.


Would you have like a sample acapella from somone?
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby James R. » Aug 16th, '07, 04:44

No. The beat has someone saying "Show em what you got" already. Just listen to the actual song. When Jay says "And wave, and wave, and wave" you hear the voice in the back going "Show em what you got".
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby J Won » Aug 16th, '07, 04:58

Oh, I'm stupid. :sweating:
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 16th, '07, 11:51

damn dope shit there :worship: cant wait fo ur audios...should be tight :y:
and flow was very good...so did the lryics :worship:
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Re: Show Me What You Got

Postby James R. » Aug 17th, '07, 04:26

Thanks for the feed people. Uppin for a little more feed.
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