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something I don't do

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something I don't do

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 19th, '07, 07:23

this man looks at his life 4 tha last time
like a criminal still paying 4 his past crimes
I can't relax knowing I could have had more
I'm locked in hell, standing behind that door
I smile thinking about tha other plan
darkness falls I've become another man
my shadow knows tomorrow will be bad
lost in tha moment, little time 2 react
I know she's seen it in my eyes
tha pain never left me so why cry
life goes on, and I'm still here
maybe 1 day tha clouds will clear
and I'll go down in a change
but 4 now I'll drown in tha rain
as long as she's happy, I'm nothing
why was I hoping 2 find something
it's like a movie made of stones
it weighs heavy on ya when yur alone
so u feel like a statue long forgtten
steady falling as a strong floors dropping
even I know no man falls twice
u don't want me 2 say it'll be alright
my world is crumbling who cares
I really didn't expect 2 see u there
most askwhy I have 2 live so free
but they never take tha time 2 know me
love's crazy, I double over from stress queasy
I dream of u baby but I'll never rest easy
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Re: something I don't do

Postby C-Game » Aug 19th, '07, 19:26

a style i have never seen from u mate..
looks good.. and da flow is by far ur best...
well i didnt c ur hard hittin killer multies in this but its a good approach man..
likin it..
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Re: something I don't do

Postby James R. » Aug 19th, '07, 19:45

Ill flow man, not a style I've seen from you and you kinda laid off the multies and it kinda threw me off lol. Good shit man.
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Re: something I don't do

Postby Flamez » Aug 19th, '07, 19:59

i like it man and the flow was nice :y:
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