for me and my fans

[Ka0t1c]

at the forefront
death from war haunts
and i can't ignore taunts
that's absorbed up
then more thoughts
from threats I store up
so i've gotta board up
ahead before i blow up

cuz i'll go over the edge
and destroy ya
i've already done said
enjoy ya voyage or pledge
avoid the stories i've read
poisoned in led
i warn ya
they'll shorten ya depth


Illinois is the set
Kevin McCoy's who I rep
and i've been appointed to step
at this point on the map
to exploit ya, not to join in mishaps
boy are you spoilin our rap
cuz you're toyin with traps

im a soldier, a champ
im loyal, it's stamped
embroidered, and clamped
on my shoulders and pants
i hold in my hands
the torch and i stand
by my porch for the flag
George Bush and my Fans

[Rain Matrix]

Thats tha kind of rap I like...

[James R.]

Feelin it man. You came up a lot between this piece and the last one I gave feed to. The rhyming was nicely paced and it wasn't too simplistic either. Keep it up.

[Flamez]

nice i like this one good job

[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i appreciate ur input, i liked this one a lot as well

[Kojack]

SHORT LINES?

That is what is destroying a Song

[4D]

SHORT LINES?

That is what is destroying a Song

Line Length is irrelevant.

The flow was great, some nice multi's which you are always good at and I like the ending too. Very good man, probably the best i've read from you so far! Keep it up.