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That muthafuckincocksuckin good for nuthin piece of shit, mu

Postby shady4life! » Aug 21st, '07, 01:15

I am only postin this becuz im pissed, i do a lot of writin and shit, but i really dont see the point in postin this when they r angry haters out there waitin to critisize it, go ahead punks critisize every single line one by one I dont really mind for real thats fine, i know how u people do ur shit here but i dont giv a fuck i aint scared, common say shit insult me like im crazy, i am already pissed at the max u cant phaze me, go ahead diss me, cusss me, piss me, pussies your words will push me as much as the breeze. You'll never hurt me or bring me to my knees, i'll stand firm like i'm in a deep freeze, stay strong tough like a G, but u haters will never change who i be

The reason y i am postin this is becuz i want everyone to know that there is a nigga that lives up in Swisserland and skools in the UK thats name is mikki. Claims to be a tough guy but he's real fake, if i had a gun i wud squeeze the fuckin trigga on him till it break. U wanna know y i hate this guy? Yeah read on and u just might find out y...


I dont respect Mikki or take him serious,
its not that i dont like him, i hate him period,
cuz that muthafucka gets me too furious,
that freakshow faggot-ass circus clown,
last week he was caught pissin sat down,
cuz he cant stand and piss like a man,
he gotta sit and piss out piss like a bitch,
cuz he aint got no dick, Mik ur pathetic,
I dont know wat u r, u neither male nor female,
all ur ass needs to do is bail,
You and your friend Bobby r like chip and dale,
2 loudmouth animals that run their lip,
gay-ass muthafuckas that cant do shit,
Mik the only thing you know,
is how to walk and shake ur fat ass like a ho,
and fuck other niggas,
always lookin for a cocks to suck bigga and bigga,
Even when u die and go to hell,
u'll fuck the devil there aswell,
Mikki your life is awful,
everyday you go to work in a brawffle,
and fuck gay men, over and over again,
even your own father every now and then,
and in the end, even tho u fuck so many,
you only earn justa few pennies at the end of the day,
but u dont care much, you love your job anyway,
Common fag go ahead continue to brag,
about urself like promotin a new product,
Mikki, i'll break ur tiny bones into saw dust,
Feelin all tough cuz his body is a lil hunky,
dancin to capoheira beats like a monkey,
Mik what makes you think ur the only one that can fight?
I practice martial arts everyday and fuckin night,
Bitch i'll rip your fuckin head off at first sight,
Kid, you Stuart Little, and im a fine pitbull,
i'll tear ur ass up and drink wine from ur thick skull,
Damn, im nearly two metres tall,
I can lift and rip ur toy arms off like a doll,
Drop your plastic body and watch it fall,
and spit on ur ass as you begin to crawl,
go ahead bitch if ur afaid call ur mates,
but u know they will probably arrive to late,
and the process wud only happen a lil slowa
but you all will share the same fate,
you wont be the only one layin in a hospital bed half dead in sober,
cut up like u been under a lawn mower,
So as i said before Mik, let it go dawg its ova,
I suggess u talk less instead, cuz the shit you say one day can cost u ur head,
Mik this aint no joke man i aint playin,
this is all true the shit im sayin,
Mik fuck with me u'll be found layin in the rain,
half dead on the ground to God u prayin,
bones broken neck chokin, around blud stains,
the next thing you will hear are ambulance sirains,
slowly losin consciousness as blood rushes from ur brain,
This is sumthin ima say once which i wont say again,
Mikki no your place bitch and stay in ur muthafuckin lane,


go ahead haters critisize onit, vomit call my work a piece a shit, i dont care cuz i wont be here to read ur commints :y:
If u dont like the way i act then blow me, i ride with the real peeps who know me.
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Re: That muthafuckincocksuckin good for nuthin piece of shit, mu

Postby Tash8 » Aug 21st, '07, 01:27

I dont respect Mikki or take him serious,
its not that i dont like him, i hate him period,

too eminemish or atleast those rhyme were exactly eminems..

'Cause real lyricists dont even respect you, or take you serious!
It's not that we don't like you--we hate you period!

flow is off at some points

last week he was caught pissin sat down - pissin sittin down

some shit doesn't even rhyme

anyways, keep at it, you got some personals in there, but i think you coulda used them in a better way

also, try to feed other people before you come here and just post something
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Re: That muthafuckincocksuckin good for nuthin piece of shit, mu

Postby Kojack » Aug 21st, '07, 01:54

Talking about anger. Nigga we should have u at the riots, make all the dumbasses run back for cover.
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Re: That muthafuckincocksuckin good for nuthin piece of shit, mu

Postby IceAxe » Aug 21st, '07, 01:57

o ahead haters critisize onit, vomit call my work a piece a shit, i dont care cuz i wont be here to read ur commints


Then why post it? Its just a waste of time...

if you dont care if we comment, why should we care to read it?
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Re: That muthafuckincocksuckin good for nuthin piece of shit, mu

Postby J Roc » Aug 21st, '07, 04:44

its a good read if u flow like eminem in nail in tha coffin, theres a few parts you should fix or take out,but overall it'd be a good audio :y:
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Re: That muthafuckincocksuckin good for nuthin piece of shit, mu

Postby Kojack » Aug 22nd, '07, 07:53

Tash8 wrote:I dont respect Mikki or take him serious,
its not that i dont like him, i hate him period,

too eminemish or atleast those rhyme were exactly eminems..

'Cause real lyricists dont even respect you, or take you serious!
It's not that we don't like you--we hate you period!

flow is off at some points

last week he was caught pissin sat down - pissin sittin down

some shit doesn't even rhyme

anyways, keep at it, you got some personals in there, but i think you coulda used them in a better way

also, try to feed other people before you come here and just post something


This is not personal, that's business
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