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Sorry Pal (Short Story of a Dead Man)

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Sorry Pal (Short Story of a Dead Man)

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 21st, '07, 08:26

swallowed in the bowels of Hell
dwells a hollow soft shell
cuz he followed the wrong route
and lost all his pals but oh well...

down the alley he was found
bloody body and rotten smell
what he encountered will prolly tell
when the aw-topsy help's allowed (autopsy)

but look now, he's drawn a crowd
yet still a pawn along his realm
somehow underground becomes his house
because the results from his wrongful faults

...maybe was a gang member???
...criminal???
...abusing power???
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Sorry Pal (Short Story of a Dead Man)

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 21st, '07, 22:12

cool drop, u should use this theme again
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Re: Sorry Pal (Short Story of a Dead Man)

Postby Kojack » Aug 22nd, '07, 00:00

This thread.........































































































































































































































































.....makes me cum.
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My name is Rickie and i got a Dickie. My name is Buck and im here to fuck.
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