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Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 22nd, '07, 00:18

without warning, it's now forming, this world is growth based on breakable love
witness tha quickest kids with tickets ta sickness, still I know what I'm capable of

u see surreal scenes, as yur real dreams, are upgrading, reality's seen much fading
them visions enlisting men wishing 2 end missions, while I say fuck waiting
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Postby James R. » Aug 22nd, '07, 01:48

only 4 lines, but it's still dope bro. definitely feelin it so far. keep the heat coming. keep the flow tight.
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Postby Tash8 » Aug 22nd, '07, 04:49

honestly if your gonna only post 4 lines at a time, dont' post it.. cause i'm pretty sure that if i did feed this i wont come back and refeed it.. so i'll just wai till u finish to feed
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