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What Did U Say?

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 23rd, '07, 22:43

this is 4 any muthafucka tha ever doubted me...

questions swirl around me, like will I find different luck
a vortex of joy and pain, 4 some it is an instant rush
it's like a surreal scene, painted by a distant brush
hate fights 4 control, I dare them 2 call me a wanna be
I love 2 prove um wrong, handling my business on tha keys
what will become of me, I stay steady in tha text move me
symbolic of irony, imagery lets everything connect smoothly
I'll be remembered after I'm forgotten, that's what I call closure
tha book I didn't write, will convey well when it's all over
what some keep locked away, will ultimately take fools ink
truth is what opens up are minds, thats why I make u think
I fight 4 what I believe in, pride is vulnerable never hurt yurs
tha intentional tears will fall, I feel 4 everyone ever murdered
u can hold memories close, but I'll tell u new sorrows cling
tha old ones drag u down, so imagine what tomorrow brings
I don't know how much more I can give, u see rains done drained
possibilities are endless, but there is only one u, that remains unchanged
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Kojack » Aug 23rd, '07, 22:48

Yo if i battle u, what u gonna say ese?
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:29

Kojack wrote:Yo if i battle u, what u gonna say ese?


if I accepted yur call out it would be a mockery of my own skill... :8)

so get drunk or high or do what ever it is u do but don't do this 2 yurself... :shifty:

suicide is not tha way 2 go... :(
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Kojack » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:32

Lmao....ur "skills"??? Aww dont tell me ur afraid....
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:35

set it up bitch, drop yur best bitten lines, and I might... MIGHT just give u tha ass whuppin u deserve

thanx for tha feed regardless
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:37

Rain Matrix wrote:
Kojack wrote:Yo if i battle u, what u gonna say ese?


if I accepted yur call out it would be a mockery of my own skill... :8)

so get drunk or high or do what ever it is u do but don't do this 2 yurself... :shifty:

suicide is not tha way 2 go... :(


a bit cocky since ur punches don't make sense.
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Kojack » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:38

Rain Matrix wrote:set it up bitch, drop yur best bitten lines, and I might... MIGHT just give u tha ass whuppin u deserve

thanx for tha feed regardless


No no no no no, i aint wasting my 5 mins unless u waste ur 5 mins.
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:42

well by yur meaningless posting on my dope piece I have come 2 some conclusions...

1. u loved it as did I thanx man :y:
2. u would be honored 2 be beaten by me
3. u won't stop posting 2 we battle

so even tho I feel this isn't a battle trshady.com wants 2 see, lets get it over

set it tha fuck up I'll drop and hopefully u'll shut tha fuck up, no hate
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Kojack » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:48

Good i set it up.
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:53

i can't wait to see this one
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Kojack » Aug 23rd, '07, 23:55

Guess i will go first.
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby J Roc » Aug 24th, '07, 00:35

@tha drop--tha dropp was good man,but,recently i havent enjoyed your rhymes as much as i used to,theyre starting to change,but thats just my oppiniun...
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 24th, '07, 01:09

b4 they supposedly didn't make sense now I know their real...
as 4 changing, I couldn't tell u it's still enjoyable 4 me
thanx 4 tha feedback guys
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby Tash8 » Aug 24th, '07, 01:10

yes they are a lot better no rain, they actually make sense, honestly you did good in this one, real good.. ur stepping up and actually making sense, soo good job.
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Re: What Did U Say?

Postby J Roc » Aug 24th, '07, 01:14

Rain Matrix wrote:b4 they supposedly didn't make sense now I know their real...
as 4 changing, I couldn't tell u it's still enjoyable 4 me
thanx 4 tha feedback guys


they always made sence,people just didnt think on them,or im missin sumthin :unsure:

dont get me wrong,theyre still enjoyable,im just sayin i enjoyed ya rhymes awhile back more
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