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[Kojack]

I aint Kojack u queer ass.

I registered 3 months before sicilizbest and i dont know him. He got 150 posts. That says something.

[4D]

He doesn't spam, he probably doesn't have time or a proper internet connection to post more regularly. He mostly posts his rhymes, if no one feeds them he doesn't complain, if they do fair enough. What's the fuckin big deal, get a life and stop gettin your ass hurt because people aren't feeding your rhymes. Sicily posted a rhyme, he didn't even ask for feedback. Tash, if you're gonna start hijacking everyone's topic like this you should be hit with a warning as that is a proper offence on most boards. This is on the 2nd page already with only two replies about the rhyme. Also if I post a rhyme and they bark shit like this in my thread they can expect some swift feedback on their rhymes and it will be brutally honest.

And about bitching in the download area about newbies making requests, that is also not a rule. So they are allowed request once they put it in the request section. But, like the "creative writing feed" issue, it is regarded proper etiquette to at least contribute to the downloads before requesting. But is not a rule, so I won't allow bitching, if you see people bitching to newcomers just P.m me and I will tell them about the situation.

This is supposed to be a friendly place, stop leaving your crummy lives with a chip on your shoulder and arriving here to fuck up someones day.

[Tash8]

4d, how about this i'll comprise with you, i wont leave such an insulting message but i will tell them "kindly" to please give criticism to others when i feed theres.

On with the feed

killas called serial (cereal) but they aint got tricks (trix)
unless its to put some more milk in the dish

nice little wordplay,. but i didn't get the second bar

filthy and rich, this cannot mix
thats why your bones break when you give em a twist

not bad here, but your flow is too umm too umm too mechinical like james would say

a stonewall face cuz you live in the bricks(get it? Chea)
move in for the kill but i aint give u an inch

nice wordplay again. but flow is too messed up for me

grippin the sticks, holding the matches
mixed wit gasoline hoping it catches

catchy there

the wagon the morgue and they open ya casket
what do i store, jus say go go gadgets

huh?

have some fun, while we're smokin and laughin
its done,focus, start approaching the action

seems like ur babbling here

blood and guts spill bones broken and blasted
its not hocus pocus, i dont play for the magics

nice

they aint had the feel since o'neil had been drafted
but i feel and im real, and im stealin ya mattress

overall: you got some nice wordplay good job.. those flow is a bit off at some points

[4D]

4d, how about this i'll comprise with you, i wont leave such an insulting message but i will tell them "kindly" to please give criticism to others when i feed theres.

That's fine man, nothin' wrong with that.

[sicilyzbest]

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[sicilyzbest]

this is hilarious....ayo leave me a comment if u want to.....is it wasting space on your computer screen or something? the little subject title? or are you just a clown.....

lil kid shit......

[C-Game]

im gettin certain reports abt certain people who go against peeps who post stuff with out feedin..

if u dont wanna feed them just dont read it..
fair enough???

dont continue this,,,

no fuck that, when there was the 100 post rule and people would come request rgiht away, they get bitched at, so i'm doing it here..

it aint the same ....
and sicilyz started even before me and he is like rain..
he only post rhymes..

so if u dont wanna leave feed .. den dont,,,

LOCKED!!!