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COntroversy ( tash8 )

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COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby sicilyzbest » Aug 24th, '07, 07:19

If u know me...then you're the important people

Tash8 needs to keep his back straight

you cant cope cuz im living in the fast life
approach youll choke,get smoke like a hashpipe
ya chillin in the dark but im comin wit a flashlight
talkin all ya shit, and surrounded by asswipes
maybe in ya last night, ya cryin like a baby
im smokin blunts wit sonik and rhymin wit hayzi
my pillow in a willow cuz ive sworn bein shady
add the TR, a couple clicks and its raining
on this kids parade,so quit, stop complaining
lets battle to the top and see who's left remaining
SIcilyzBest and i was born in the eighties
its 4 sure, shit is pure, im a thorn your a daisy
it says u a general but kids still training
ya comments were helpful, the truth entertaining
how is this a roast, if im the one thats blazing
4 thousand fuckin posts, tash8 is so amazing
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Re: COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby Kojack » Aug 24th, '07, 07:47

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My name is Rickie and i got a Dickie. My name is Buck and im here to fuck.
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Re: COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby 4D » Aug 24th, '07, 10:34

That's dope. Great flow and rhythm, sweet multi's and some clever wordplay. You might no be that active on here, but you sure haven't got rusty! :y:
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Re: COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 24th, '07, 10:36

good stuff :worship:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby Flamez » Aug 24th, '07, 16:49

that was some nice shit :y:
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Re: COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby Tash8 » Aug 24th, '07, 17:08

wow grow some balls, you noticed how i ended up giving you feed at the end didnt you?

edit: atleast when you diss me, you know, you should actually diss me.
Last edited by Tash8 on Aug 24th, '07, 17:38, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby James R. » Aug 24th, '07, 17:27

That was decent. I don't really think it was that amazing, but it was a solid diss. Some of the lines were kinda lame. The "thorn your a daisy" line was so blah. You could have done something better with that. It did have a nice flow to it and although the multies weren't complicated they were solid and held the flow together nicely. Decent drop
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Re: COntroversy ( tash8 )

Postby Kojack » Aug 26th, '07, 11:40

Tash8 wrote:wow grow some balls, you noticed how i ended up giving you feed at the end didnt you?

edit: atleast when you diss me, you know, you should actually diss me.


Well, when he diss you he does the right thing

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