8 Barz

[sicilyzbest]

8 quick ones...


im a monster, a mobster, ive reached my peak
steadyin my posture, on freezin streets
talk all you wanna dont believe my speech
im comin wit a reason and seasoned beef
why creep, when i jus stay on top
ya wastin my time and my frame of thought
ill bust out this place, the chains and locks
ya facin the ace with the spades and heart

[Tash8]

some of the multis were too forced but overall it wasn't bad

[Kojack]

Non era cattivo.

[CaptivatingVokalz]

im a monster, a mobster, ive reached my peak
steadyin my posture, on freezin streets Good Opening...
talk all you wanna dont believe my speech confused me a bit...it should've been something like "talk all you wanna, I don't believe in speech...talk is cheap" something like that
im comin wit a reason and seasoned beef not to crazy about this line...could've worded it better
why creep, when i jus stay on top this line was unnecessary...
ya wastin my time and my frame of thought love these last 3 lines!!
ill bust out this place, the chains and locks
ya facin the ace with the spades and heart

[Enimee]

good shit sciz...and uhhh captivatingvolkalz? umm yeah dude that was ignorant give crit. dont tell him what he should or shouldnt say thats just rude...i get what you were tryin to do but just choose different words next time bro....<---my opinion

[4D]

good shit sciz...and uhhh captivatingvolkalz? umm yeah dude that was ignorant give crit. dont tell him what he should or shouldnt say thats just rude...i get what you were tryin to do but just choose different words next time bro....<---my opinion

Kind of agree, but isn't it obvious Captivating Vokalz isn't a "dude"?

[Enimee]

i jus realized that 4d when i clicked her lil thingy for her myspace and DAMN SHE"S HOTT....


im just sayin...