Happily Ever After

[Enimee]

been a while since i typed nuffin but peep this


Chorus:
Heres for your Happily Ever After
we're happy just forgetting Laughter
and the factor that still plays a part in this Disaster
(i suck wit choruses' i always make them a little too short)

Verse:
You listen as i lick these self inflicted wounds ...clean...
Maybe i should stick to pickin tunes ...see...
Life is what you make of it so if life sux you suck
The point is we're stuck without a second chance or an ounce of luck
But still we crawl stumble for every crumb full
settin an example look this is what our sons'll do
fightin and stabbin pickin and grabbin
man im just sick of this happnin like a trick that was lackin
a joke without a punchline i ate yours now duck mine the fact is
when will this end matter of fact when did it begin
wars drug out over centuries rivalries of our fathers
what was this meant to be a fight for a lives or for dead chivalry ..why bother...
either way we slice it we all will die in the end
just livin to die thats what ozzy said
so why would i continue backstabbing my brother
tip your glasses instread guys...me? im grabbin another

chrous



verse 2
(coming soon)


i know my structures all over the place guys just try to grasp the flow cause its there...jus...idk im wierd with writin

[stevethetruth]

not bad dude you had some nice multis in there

[Enimee]

thnx steve...workin on second verse prolly have that and third by tomoro

[C-Game]

decent drop enimee...


there were some good lines in there..

man im just sick of this happnin like a trick that was lackin
a joke without a punchline i ate yours now duck mine the fact is

i like that...

but IMO "fact is" is hard to rhyme with "lackin" but u can make it sound like it on audio..
but wen readin da flow was off a lil...

good to c u back mate...

[Enimee]

thanks cgame really appreciate that especially from you