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just for practice..

Postby Flamez » Aug 24th, '07, 17:56

i feel like i'm getting rusty.. but here goes nothing

rollin' in my nissan watchin' the speedometer
with fifteen thousand 980 showin' on the odometer
with law enforcement officers a kilometer away
more than three cops convey on my radar display
to there dismay after an hour i've gotten away
with the next day showin' the action replay
everybody lookin' at me in a bad way but fuck it
i'm a legit criminal i admit i'm ready to emit
like it or not i'm gettin' a base hit u throwin' a fit
i'm twistin' this shit up a bit i'm at my wit's end
better not offend me or say hello to my lil friend
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Re: just for practice..

Postby Kojack » Aug 24th, '07, 21:28

Nissan lmao do those still sell????????
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Re: just for practice..

Postby Flamez » Aug 24th, '07, 22:53

look thats the car i got aight..and yes they still sell i ain't gon' lie about what car i have at least i have a car that runs pretty well.. and i know this wasn't good on my opinion being mine but i just wanted to write something..
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Re: just for practice..

Postby Curtis » Aug 24th, '07, 23:10

my dad is giving me a lexxxus :p

a friend gave it to him and he just had to pay whats left.
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Re: just for practice..

Postby stevethetruth » Aug 25th, '07, 17:17

not bad dude

not you best though :happy:
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