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Freestyle Comp Verse

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Freestyle Comp Verse

Postby James R. » Aug 30th, '07, 07:12

I know I haven't posted much feed but I got accepted into college and I've been here since Saturday morning. Anyways tonight there was a freestyle competition with a grand prize of $400. There were 16 people so there were 4 rounds. The last round me and my opponent picked a beat and wrote to it. He picked Tipsy and I picked Lose Yourself (shout out to Eminem) and I did this verse in 5 minutes. No lie. Literally 5 minutes.

I walked on stage mind stuck in awkward phases
Locked on faces wishin words would hop off pages
I quit hearin the slick lyrics my, tongue tied
I'm sick here and my wit's nearing the finish line
Hoes is on my dick my consciousness is fading
Flow is non-descript it's obvious they hatin
But it's time to shine my grinds in prime rotation
Defy the lies and ride with blind notation
I'll hold it down, make Hova proud, and drop
It's over now I'll you round the block
Cuz this is my nature and no I don't hate ya
Flows you won't tast cuz hoes they won't chase ya
Wrote it on paper no I'm blowin on stage cuz
I know that y'all fakers I'm goin out major

Then I threw the mic in the air for effect........ Luckily the host caught it cuz I woulda probably had to pay that out of my $400 winnings :smoking: :boxing:
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Re: Freestyle Comp Verse

Postby patwivo » Aug 30th, '07, 07:52

that's pretty fuckin dope mad props to you
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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Re: Freestyle Comp Verse

Postby Flamez » Aug 30th, '07, 08:03

that was tight man..
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Re: Freestyle Comp Verse

Postby joelle » Aug 30th, '07, 18:53

YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYYYYYYYYYY
:D :D :D :D
you rock Jam
buy me a present.
Yes, we can.
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Re: Freestyle Comp Verse

Postby Tash8 » Aug 30th, '07, 21:09

haha good job man
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