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Trouble Which Dwells

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Trouble Which Dwells

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 1st, '07, 14:08

i can't truck around and get struck on down
i must rebound and clutch the ground
i touch or else be found stuck
but now it's tough
i doubt that luck will help
im bout to drown
so i gotta watch it somehow erupt right out
what's this drought?

i'll come up like clouds

is it cuz i rush - it sounds
hip hop has lost their crowd
but it is not my fault
i walk a long hall

but once my album hits shelves
i'm gonna solve the problems brought which follows our routes
then by tomorrow i'd hault the hollow soft shells
from evolvin to sprout thru the bottom called Hell
cuz an apostle like Paul, my response is gospel
to dissolve all of the spells

go tell ya pals i've encountered the Count,
the coward devil and his powers expelled
yeah, there's trouble that dwells under the realm
i've discovered myself
you're wonderin, well
im a hunter, i cover your health
while you're stubborn, i still offer my stealth
then coffins are dealt

suddenly they'll
suffer n melt
where no comfort is felt
cuz a stunt double won't help
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Sep 2nd, '07, 19:01, edited 1 time in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: honest feedback plz

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 1st, '07, 20:28

honestly u have an underlying message keep clawing at it :smoking:
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Re: honest feedback plz

Postby shady4life! » Sep 2nd, '07, 18:06

those were okay rhymes but to be honest didnt really understand much. If someone was to ask me wat this thing was about i wud not know wat to say... i agree with Maytrix keep at it make it a full song and add more verses and a title to giv us more of an idea wat exactly u mean. :y:
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