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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 30th, '07, 23:53

aint wrote to a beat in a while, aint wrote anything in a while (well nothign serious and/or lyrical)

so trying to get back into the swing of things


spittin on borrowed time, never used a borrowed ryhme
matter of fact i wouldnt be suprised if they borrowing mine
let me lay it this time, everyone bean cease
they think im down with green peace coz i bin all these rappers
man i sin like theese trappers when im catching my prey
im like every day its just off of the head but all ya'll still dropping off dead
man im poppin of led, i mean my pencil, what you think i said


trappers - people who set traps to catch animals for fur n shit (like poachers)


took like 4 minutes :sweating:

feed anywae :y:
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Re: couple of bars

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 31st, '07, 00:01

umm yea :unsure: pretty wack from ya :p still decent...but i saw better stuff from ya :y:
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Tash8 » Aug 31st, '07, 00:40

wasn't anything great, but i understand what happens, happens to me all the time, u don't write for a while and u lose everything then you do like 10 bars, and another and another and their all wack and by the 5th wack shit, ur gonna be amazed at ur 6th, cuz ur coming back in style.
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Re: couple of bars

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 1st, '07, 19:01

thanx for the feed :y:

n yeh imm starting to get into the swing of it more now lol
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Kojack » Sep 1st, '07, 20:46

Thats motherfucking gangsta. Keep that up.

Oh yeah, fuck the pencil lead, get a snub-nose theyeight and buckwild nigga.
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 1st, '07, 20:49

kojack u wouldn't know gangsta if your mom was fucking pac :o

if u feel like that was a shot at a legend yur wrong, call me out retard

belittled is tha mind that circulates tha same repetetive thoughts :smoking: :shifty:
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Kojack » Sep 1st, '07, 20:55

Rain Matrix wrote:kojack u wouldn't know gangsta if your mom was fucking pac :o

if u feel like that was a shot at a legend yur wrong, call me out retard

belittled is tha mind that circulates tha same repetetive thoughts :smoking: :shifty:


Hmmm....gangster, member a gang, criminal or person that is deep into organised crime. Usually assossiated with acts like the mob. See...i know what a gangster is.
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 1st, '07, 21:00

:o tha crackhead can read a dictionary dear god he is gangsta

maybe u should record :laughing:
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Kojack » Sep 1st, '07, 21:15

Rain Matrix wrote::o tha crackhead can read a dictionary dear god he is gangsta

maybe u should record :laughing:


Maybe you shouldnt. U suck at it.
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 1st, '07, 23:15

wow I'm devasted a crackhead doesn't like my audio =D>

why do audio I could own anybody here on text

my lyrical content isn't hurting
u... u don't even have a real line in yur sig
probably cuz u have never keyed a real line and never will... :-({|=
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Kojack » Sep 1st, '07, 23:22

Haha, thats funny. Why key a line when i can do the real thing? You know, record it, mix it, master it...you know...the REAL music. As if i should have a "real line" in my sig to make me a rapper. That's ridiculous you know.

why do audio I could own anybody here on text


Cuz "audio" is the real deal. They call it rap music because its MUSIC. And people listen to music, and they use their EARS for it. Lol. Otherwise it would be rap text and rappers would sell their rhymebooks instead.

But you like to think that you doing something great and important because you "text". Well im always above you, cause i can do what you can't do but pretend you can. I can rap what i write, i can record it, i make it a song. You cant. Not only your rhymes are out of point, you dont say anything in them either. So im one step ahead of you, point blank.

Oh and calling me crackhead doesnt mean anything really, since its just some bullshit you came up with, since i dont do crack. So its plain stupid. Find a better insult next time.
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 2nd, '07, 13:06

aight then u faggot little bitch, u want raintime?

I'm gonna start doing audio, make your pop music

take your shots while u can, your gonna eat your words

besides everyone knows...
rappers that record that have any type of talent
get killed by crackheads like u, so get 2 stepping
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Kojack » Sep 2nd, '07, 13:21

Oh god no what have i done, i condemned us into a torture that has no equal.

Oh well, i can always not click the link. :y:
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Rain Matrix » Sep 2nd, '07, 13:42

so maybe no one will... by tha way great drop in tha 4 on 4 match, =D> :boxing: :stretcher:

first I let u bitch's think tha drought's next
but even shady's singing about sex
I guess raps going thru it's whore phase
it all adds up this must be foreplay

bar sorry 4 all tha posting, u did good :y:

no one forces pointless comments, I'm sorry I lowered myself 2 kojackness
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Re: couple of bars

Postby Kojack » Sep 2nd, '07, 15:11

You're lower than kojackness. You on rain matrixness right now. Miles below.
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