I'm tryna find tha reason I'm breathin'
I'm needin' peace and freedom
But all I'm receivin' is dayz of bleedin'
Grievin' over my people that are dead becuz I need 'em
I'm dreamin' dreamz of me in Hell, don't know if I should believe 'em
Squeezin' triggerz in every season got me lookin' for my heart and soul but I can't see 'em
I can't even believe I'm seein' demonz
So every nite I pray to Jesus that soon I'll be leavin'
Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
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Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by -[Zach]- » Sep 6th, '07, 03:12
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac
"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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Re: Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by Inzanity » Sep 6th, '07, 03:15
this was good and the main reason why is cuz' u didn't change ur rhyme's, All the line's rhyme with eachother. That take's skill to do that nice job 
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Re: Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by -[Zach]- » Sep 6th, '07, 03:16
thank u 4 the compliment.
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac
"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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Re: Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by Steve Spag » Sep 6th, '07, 03:24
Really sick man. Cleverly written, sick rhyme scheme for it.
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Re: Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by -[Zach]- » Sep 6th, '07, 03:44
thankz man
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac
"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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Re: Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by BabyBLue91 » Sep 6th, '07, 04:47
ooo clever rhyming! i like! 
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Re: Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by -[Zach]- » Sep 6th, '07, 04:49
well thank u
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac
"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro
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Re: Just Something I Wrote A While Ago
by Willystyle » Sep 20th, '07, 14:19
nice rhyme and nice flow, you killed it. 
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