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Battle rhyme Game (no poetry, just pure hate rhymes)

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Battle rhyme Game (no poetry, just pure hate rhymes)

Postby AspirinE » Jun 8th, '05, 11:02

drop 6 lines not more everypne

ur rhyme has to be as ill and as sick as possible and has to be rfered to the previous rhyme(just like as if everyone was battlin)

anybody care to drop first?
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Postby 4D » Jun 8th, '05, 16:50

Yo! My rhymes are warped, 6 lines, it`s short.
No act, i crack skulls like capsulls 4 lines to snort,
Dissolve ASSpirine in a Vodka shot, lost da plot
Messin with ILL, teach a lesson in skill 2u sissies in dresses n frills
Leav u thinkin` "he impresses n thrills when he`s flexin`his quill".
But my pens not a feather, more like a blade leavin ur chest wit sum gills!!
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Postby AspirinE » Jun 8th, '05, 17:09

FORDIE wrote:Yo! My rhymes are warped, 6 lines, it`s short.
No act, i crack skulls like capsulls 4 lines to snort,
Dissolve ASSpirine in a Vodka shot, lost da plot
Messin with ILL, teach a lesson in skill 2u sissies in dresses n frills
Leav u thinkin` "he impresses n thrills when he`s flexin`his quill".
But my pens not a feather, more like a blade leavin ur chest wit sum gills!!


Bitch run wen my guns are bustin/
I hope in god u trustin/
coz in about 10sec a bullet in your head thrustin/
u be cryin like a pussy coz a longer life u Lustin/
u assalting me..is like a peonassalting an empireal/
u aint ready for this coz u aint war material/


Lol my shit was wack as hell LOL


but any ways everyone write ur shit
rember only 6 lines
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Postby TRshady » Jun 8th, '05, 17:18

Its clear, aspirine is what I'm addicited to, I deliver max payne
I fear, the blood flow is unrestricted once I slash the main vein
its evident, a chain of events put in place to entertain
remain on top rolling, coming at you like 'a passenger train
with no brakes, have scarlet red flowing like a river
have you gazing at your guts while you notice yesterdays dinner ....

Keep 'em coming people :wink:
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Postby 4D » Jun 8th, '05, 21:04

Nice rhyme, can`t believe u wrote em, broke da boredom
for a sec, second thoughts nah, snatch u out da forum thru da modem
I choke Trshady by the throat `til da eye balls pop
an cut him from da shit t`da tits, `till it`s nigh all slop
Tr shady`s been eliminated by da incinerator
I don`t imitate, or get intimidated by administraters!



Good rhyme, keep it up!
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Postby TRshady » Jun 8th, '05, 21:18

never been choked without having provoked, is a tactic to wealth
but what goes around comes around Fordie you only harming yourself
hell admin or not, come sail with me cause your ass forgot
getting yourself into a situation you can't get out off like a fishermans knot
I'm like an underaged female, you can't touch me, its hereditary
smash with such force I'll dynamically deform your future kids genetically

and with that I was gone, decent Rhyme Fordie ..
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Postby 4D » Jun 8th, '05, 22:47

Fuck it, underage or not, i`ll stage a plot
to go back in time an fuck u in ur place of cot.
Not wit a dick, a bladed weapon, like that sick moment in "Se7en".
Seventy seven stitches from ur navel to ur spine.
Prayin in ur mind "It`ll end soon, a grave`ll do just fine".
I`m flyin a fine a fine line tween deranged and sane o mind!!!
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oxide, shitty funny one

Postby shadypelkey » Jun 9th, '05, 01:12

why is this fordie guy always yellin?
ya'll need to be kool and start jellin
I know it ain't my place to say
but hey, where cool aren't we?
it's not like u can come through and fight me
or maybe you can, if ya on some drugs man
takin that hit, becomin harder to flip
bloods boiling ot tha top
you gotta make that pop pop
like a soda pop fizz, bizz, mizz
test this.........lol
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Postby shadypelkey » Jun 9th, '05, 01:29

ok I'm back, who the fuck wrote that?
wasn't me, guess it was my other side ethanice
man he nice, but fuck him, come on and fight
smashin ur head like a ram ragin n'chasin at red
kickin ya face in like you was dissin a race
backin up, chase him, set a pace
slow and steady always wins the race, haha
I'm gettin knocked down, but I get up again
not like I'm tough but I act like it enough
jeses christ watch my state of mind
but my discrepancy is strong
discreet enuogh to keep a sec-ret
ya'll just discriminate cause you ain't
ya'll think ya tough but you ain't
test my dander cause it could rise at anytime
but I have this ability to endure, crude and rude comments
but it's so much to ashure, got people steppin on my nerves
causing dread, able to start a new formidable
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Postby 4D » Jun 9th, '05, 14:18

FUKKK!!!! Dit it again. posted it as guest please delete it guests one Trshady. p.s thanks for doin da one on the other page.

Pesky Pelkey u can`t even count n shit,
Aspirine said when answerin, keep it down to six.
countless lines one more borin than da other,
should be on the street pleadin`, n whorin`with ur mother,
Fordie is a nutter, leave u snorin in da gutter
Spread ur dead mother like bread is to butter!
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Postby AspirinE » Jun 9th, '05, 14:24

All ya bitches is week with the words that u speak/
Ill put all ya into a deed sleep(coma) for a week/
played out rhymes with some on ur dimented minds/
stick to the rules and try and read before u drop ur lines/
face it.... u know Aspirine just paced it/
to bad so much time from ur life on ur lines u wasted/
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Postby AspirinE » Jun 9th, '05, 14:42

Anonymous wrote:Pesky Pelkey u can`t even count n shit,
Aspirine said when answerin, keep it down to six.
countless lines one more borin than da other,
should be on the street pleadin`, n whorin`with ur mother,
Fordie is a nutter, leave u snorin in da gutter
Spread ur dead mother like bread is to butter!



YO "guest"

go read the rulez about sayin shit like killin family members

you would get jumped for talkin shit like that on the streets

just sayin that so the hate dont get out of hand
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Postby shadypelkey » Jun 9th, '05, 20:09

aight this boy want me to keep it to six
ya thought so, he scared, cause i'm bringing bricks
pussy kid talkin shit bout my mother
come on show me another, lucky I ain't coming with my brother
fuckin up ya life, no need to make ur bed all tight
cause I paved a spot in the dirt for you tonight
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Postby 4D » Jun 10th, '05, 09:35

Incestuos momma`s boy talkin bout comin`with ur brother
keep it 2 urself, that sick shit makes me shudder
Well almost, small boast from the devil from the gutter
All yall are in a flutter, last time i`ll speak on ur siblings
Call me pussy again bitch i rip out ur clit rings
Pelkey`s bringin`bricks cos he`s shittin`em like chicklings
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Postby petrafied » Jun 11th, '05, 11:58

My style u can't fade, cuz my style is man-made, yours is programmed, wanna battle me no ma'am, i'll give u that feeling of weed cottonmouth, i'm gonna make ya rotten, ouch!
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