a piece of my life

[Ka0t1c]

my dad was cookin crack on woodlawn
and i took his smacks and i stood strong

now im lookin back, i had a good mom
but from all that crap i would run

cuz of his traps when uncalm
he'd put in slaps, what was wrong?

not happy perhaps - now your son's
out your grasp, wanna bond?

i just laugh while you're gone
as i travel along the map which is drawn

i guess it happens to some
but im blessed at rappin new songs

it blasts me beyond
and it's best i'd become

a man rather young
than one numb n left unloved...

[BigBangBazinga]

I like it, alot.

[Willystyle]

seems a little choppy but good though

[Rain Matrix]

well I expect great stuff from u, this didn't fall short, altho this only leaves me wanting 2 read more so props, piece