so/so, 50/50, maybe a lil more (???)

[Ka0t1c]

im spreadin what's imbedded in my head and
im gettin better at settin my letters to send

i wont settle again ever until i exit the end
im ready to rep who i am on the records i spin

my name is Kevin, i've spent my efforts to win
i've wrestled with sin, then stretched out

i've been sketchin what stems n kept out the dim which left doubt within
i'll never press down buttons my presence presents

it isnt much pressure to print my preference sensed by the press
i confess i have went many paths where there's stench but i adapt

my profession persists, my progression has risks
my protection: equipt, no question im quick

my quest i wont quit or act ventrilaquist
yes im adventurous, i guess im rediculous

i express what im picturin, im stressed but not vigilant
my destiny's heaven's wish, not the devil's tricks

deliverin evidence that exists i consist to assist what is amidst
whether hit or miss, to fix like medicine is my intent

[Tash8]

god man

ur style is soo messed up

a song is 16 bars

not 8 diff 2 bars... flow needs to be similar in every line, not just in 2 lines and change it up for 2 lines and change it up again.

[Ka0t1c]

I know what you mean about the format, I wrote it improperly to be easily read, and about the song, it's not a "song" my rappin style is continuous, I hardly ever make choruses... but maybe u could help me out... ty