New Verse

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how many remembers the name but the flow is still there
an the tempers the same so im goin till there is no breath left
and my chest pumps less an my flow jumps stress
thats why i always press coz the tall rays bless
less if you aint tyring your best thats why im buying the test
an i aint lying the rest will come, an im loyal so im flying the nest for some
an i guessed that one still wants me to fail well maybe more than one
but im still here son, spitting strong splitting song hitting thong,
see i aint never leaving your punches i use clever weiving
beef im passed it to much contrast shit, i just wanne perfect my style
and re-erect the smile and i expect a vile venom to spit
whenever a open my mouth n vocals come out of it


first verse for a track im writing, feed please

[Tash8]

i wasn't feeling it, multis were forced in some cases, and it's just idk it's feel like a real verse, but rather words together that made sense by themselves but as a line they didn't.

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i wasn't feeling it, multis were forced in some cases, and it's just idk it's feel like a real verse, but rather words together that made sense by themselves but as a line they didn't.

all of it makes sense

[Ka0t1c]

im not feeing it for the same reasons as tash8

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im not feeing it for the same reasons as tash8

what doesnt make sense ? cozz imma record this and it makes sense to me

[C-Game]

how many remembers the name but the flow is still there
an the tempers the same so im goin till there is no breath left
and my chest pumps less an my flow jumps stress
thats why i always press coz the tall rays bless
less if you aint tyring your best thats why im buying the test
an i aint lying the rest will come, an im loyal so im flying the nest for some
an i guessed that one still wants me to fail well maybe more than one
but im still here son, spitting strong splitting song hitting thong,
see i aint never leaving your punches i use clever weiving
beef im passed it to much contrast shit, i just wanne perfect my style
and re-erect the smile and i expect a vile venom to spit
whenever a open my mouth n vocals come out of it


first verse for a track im writing, feed please

da bolded part is kinda hard to grasp

other dan that da meanin was there...

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aww yeh i could see that

ill try make it clearer


see if the other 2 had done this when the left feed i coulda fixed it by now


thx cgame

[Ka0t1c]

spitting strong splitting song hitting thong

that part annoys me

i think if u said it like this it would make sense to me at least:

spitting strong hitting songs splitting thongs

u can use that btw...

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spitting strong splitting song hitting thong

that part annoys me

i think if u said it like this it would make sense to me at least:

spitting strong hitting songs splitting thongs

u can use that btw...

i delibretly put them around differently lol was trying to be smart lol

[Tash8]

how many remembers the name but the flow is still there
an the tempers the same so im goin till there is no breath left
and my chest pumps less an my flow jumps stress
thats why i always press coz the tall rays bless
less if you aint tyring your best thats why im buying the test
an i aint lying the rest will come, an im loyal so im flying the nest for some
an i guessed that one still wants me to fail well maybe more than one
but im still here son, spitting strong splitting song hitting thong,
see i aint never leaving your punches i use clever weiving
beef im passed it to much contrast shit, i just wanne perfect my style
and re-erect the smile and i expect a vile venom to spit
whenever a open my mouth n vocals come out of it


first verse for a track im writing, feed please

when i said i didn't understand it, i meant the whole thing together, like i said as words together they makes sense, but i don't see it making sense the whole thing.. ya know? maybe if i know the topic of this track it might make sense to me...