for a collab, not finished but i could def use some feed

[stevethetruth]

coming up in this game, i was labled as crazed
a political phaze but little did i amaze
i paced at first cause i was playing search
to find the birth of the little curse i blurt,
and spew i quietly grew as my mind did too
the truth! you best rewind this line i drew
up, screw up, you be chewed up by this new chump
so don't slump punk or you will be crew jumped
flows so hot with the lines i drop
rhymes i crop i don't need a nine to pop

[patwivo]

do u mean u need someone to collab w/u??? cuz i'll throw some shit down....here it goes

hey yo im crazy with a sickness, i got a disease, my dicks so long
ya need to be in between my knees, my neck dont freeze
i dont need them gay chains, i wear your intestines around my neck-im fuckin insane
hey yo steve tell these bitches that we're true winners, i drive a piece of shit
fuck ridin' spinners, the inner thoughts of my mind get the best of me
heres a piece of advice. get the rest of me, the whole thing
ya gotta know me, every bitch i know is begging to fuckin blow me
so show me ya titties bitch, celebration, i run shit like diddy bitch
frustration, i cant deal with it, i gotta let my anger out
time to show you the true meaning of danger now
im a disturbance to the peace, fuck the police
its pat wivo, its time for the BS to cease

let me know what you think of that

[shady4life!]

haha This guy fuckin stole the topic from u man. That was a lot better than yours. That was great patwivo

[patwivo]

didnt try to steal his shine, he said he wanted a collab so i gave it to him, thanks a lot tho
steve if u have a recording program, i can send u a beat, u can do a verse, and i can do a verse or somethin and we can post it in the audio section, hit me up

[Tash8]

no he meant he did this verse, for a collab he's doing with someone else

[patwivo]

w/e man its more like i just felt like throwin a verse, im was just in the mood to tear it up

[4D]

w/e man its more like i just felt like throwin a verse, im was just in the mood to tear it up

You should print it then and tear it up.

[Rain Matrix]

u did great, I liked your better that patwivo's

time to smack em up

I'll pat his head, with magic lead, draw out tha bitch
lay him out like a matress bed, ya flaws douse ya quick
he is too dumb, he'd know about balls if he grew some
where does he get his truth from, his fake rap gruesome
he spits nothing at people, such is tha life of patwivo
pain stings, bloods raining it's recorded like on that tivo

patwivo diss cuz steve did good

[patwivo]

wow i wasnt trying to diss steve, i thought he meant he wanted to collab w/someone
if u look at the lyrics it says "me and steve are true winners" as a friendly thing u fuckin dumb ass
but now i gotta spit back

wat the fuck are u thinkin, tryin to diss my shit
i've tasted ur moms, ur sisters, and ur girlfriends clit
ur girl wasnt too bad, she sucked me off after i fucked her
there might be a pat jr., cuz i didnt use a rubber
hey yo rain, i've seen ur flows in the rap battle section
they dont make sense, but see, i have perfection
and lookin at men gives you an erection
pat or rain? i win the election
fuckin with me, i'll leave ya face displaced
your boys can call the cops, im tryin to catch me a case
your a little bitch who's soft like pastor mase
when you hear the word penis, you react with haste
your girl loves the taste of my cum, i beat it up like a drum
if you thought she was with her friends, your obviously dumb
so dont comin dissin if you dont even know your facts
let's see the next time ya try to fuck wit pat

[Rain Matrix]

u only get worse in rhymes, jumping tha gun surging lines
pat at a ceartin time, I'll have docs operating through surgeon lines
but yur unresponsive, I got money on it, yur diss embarrassed ya
don't drag it on rookie, I'm tapping ya moms pussy cuz I wanted to tear it up
if I wanted a bitch I'd be fucking u, I'll have u seeing more ak's then tha russian news
blood splatter, tha floors sticky now, u got more holes than a sorority house, ya nothing dude

lets not defile steve's good rhymes with yur shitty ones, call me out u punk bitch!

[4D]

Pat your funny man, some good punches there, keep it up.

And Steve, great to see you finally working on your complexity and multi's, nice job man.

[patwivo]

Pat your funny man, some good punches there, keep it up.

And Steve, great to see you finally working on your complexity and multi's, nice job man.

thanks a lot

[stevethetruth]

lol the frist verse, not bad pat, but i wasn't asking for a collab it was for a collab lol

and thanks for the feedback rain

and fordie that means alot coming from you

[Willystyle]

Hey, Rain give it up PatWivo's got you beat.

[stevethetruth]

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