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freestyle from the rap battle section

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freestyle from the rap battle section

Postby patwivo » Sep 14th, '07, 03:28

i was listening to flo rida ft. t-pain-get low, while writin this freestyle on the "endless rap" thread
i just had to show everyone.....its dirty

oh shit, here i come, fuck your demands-you get none
let me put my hot dog in yo bun, come on bitch i wanna have fun
lets go to my house, fuck on the couch, put in ya mouth, then go down south
lift up ya blouse, neighbors hearin ur shouts, do me pat, do me pat
ya bicth! ya like it like that?-i bet ya do, this i know
now suck me off you dirty hoe, the harder i go, the louder you scream
get ya so wet, make ya cream, and im sure i seem vulgar
swoop down on ya just like a vulture, this in my culture
i thought your skank ass knew, this is how i do
keep on fuckin till ya face turn blue, get ya crew
orgy style, just hearin that word makes me smile
bitch have my child, i could give a shit
it's all worth it when pat messes with your clit
"You see me, I see through you. You say fuck me I say fuck you. You don't love me, I don't love you. I rise above and I say fuck you bitch!"
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