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Tash's comment was fair and has a valid point, he did not insult the contents of Synikal's poem, only the concept of poems without rhymes (Funny as fuck too btw), which is his opinion and he's entitled to it. However I think there is a place for poetry without rhymes and Synikal did a good job on this, although I agree with Patwivo about the EMinem line, too similar Synikal, it may have been an unconscious choice of words, either way it doesn't matter, Eminem doesn't own the words he says, he only owns them if they're said in an exact order and pattern. This doesn't apply because he changed it from a "fatherless past" (From "Mosh") to "fatherless life" which are the same but different, yet still too similar to give you credit for thinking of it. I think this was an okay job man, not bad at all, but I also prefer poems to have rhymes, and the more intricate and impressive the rhymes the better. That why I think that (the best) rap lyricists are the future of poetry and embody the modern evolution of it.

[patwivo]

Tash's comment was fair and has a valid point, he did not insult the contents of Synikal's poem, only the concept of poems without rhymes (Funny as fuck too btw), which is his opinion and he's entitled to it. However I think there is a place for poetry without rhymes and Synikal did a good job on this, although I agree with Patwivo about the EMinem line, too similar Synikal, it may have been an unconscious choice of words, either way it doesn't matter, Eminem doesn't own the words he says, he only owns them if they're said in an exact order and pattern. This doesn't apply because he changed it from a "fatherless past" (From "Mosh") to "fatherless life" which are the same but different, yet still too similar to give you credit for thinking of it. I think this was an okay job man, not bad at all, but I also prefer poems to have rhymes, and the more intricate and impressive the rhymes the better. That why I think that (the best) rap lyricists are the future of poetry and embody the modern evolution of it.

very observant, fair(not biased), and well written
props on this post

[SajN]

Tash's comment was fair and has a valid point, he did not insult the contents of Synikal's poem, only the concept of poems without rhymes (Funny as fuck too btw), which is his opinion and he's entitled to it. However I think there is a place for poetry without rhymes and Synikal did a good job on this, although I agree with Patwivo about the EMinem line, too similar Synikal, it may have been an unconscious choice of words, either way it doesn't matter, Eminem doesn't own the words he says, he only owns them if they're said in an exact order and pattern. This doesn't apply because he changed it from a "fatherless past" (From "Mosh") to "fatherless life" which are the same but different, yet still too similar to give you credit for thinking of it. I think this was an okay job man, not bad at all, but I also prefer poems to have rhymes, and the more intricate and impressive the rhymes the better. That why I think that (the best) rap lyricists are the future of poetry and embody the modern evolution of it.

very observant, fair(not biased), and well written
props on this post

Yeah . Great post .


Personally I think this poem was great.
But I prefer poems with rhymes.. but it is OK without rhymes too..
Well.. Everyone has their own meaning..