Annaliation (needs ft)

[Tornado]

(1st Verse)
It's this Annaliating
Music Making
Pulse Be Racing
Rapping great and
I'm violating
amd compensating
for the wack ass rap
you used to rating
but i hope you awaiting
to this new ground shaking
wave of changing
rap for new ages
but while you waiting
critics debating
rivals are hating
of what i'm shaping
busy exterminating
i'm here replacing
all the fake and
i've lost my patience
now i'm creating
a kinda new wave in
rhyme creating
your lines too basic
back to make hits
so fuck the fake shit
my rhymes are blind
my mind thats making
so give this a rating
loving or hating
compare this to you
which one u rather taking?

(2nd Verse)
me? i concentrate
refocus hate
go reinvinograte
to a all time great
i haul my weight
ignore the ahte
bear the pain
much more i take
i anticipate
hip-hops fate
as it's changing shape
i hold the ace
i swing the mace
rip through fakes
trained to perfection
no mistakes
others give chase
they cant relate
i aint the best here
but i'll claim my stake
came from outer space
a unhuman pace
lyrics are diverse
so i make a great
so congratulate
and celebrate
theres no one iller
who scraped the plate
the struggle makes
the kid a great
perserverance over pity
now i elevate

[Xray]

now that shit right ther is pure meaning of multis.. ..u had flow,structure & good vocab..by the way u gone audio this?

[Tornado]

now that shit right ther is pure meaning of multis.. ..u had flow,structure & good vocab..by the way u gone audio this?

Thanks man ..i'm looking for producers so i can send an accapella to

[$0 R3@L]

now that shit right ther is pure meaning of multis.. ..u had flow,structure & good vocab..by the way u gone audio this?

structure?

we on the same page? lol

[Tash8]

now that shit right ther is pure meaning of multis.. ..u had flow,structure & good vocab..by the way u gone audio this?

structure?

we on the same page? lol

lol sajjad what did you mean pure meaning of multis? he had none..

[Tornado]

now that shit right ther is pure meaning of multis.. ..u had flow,structure & good vocab..by the way u gone audio this?

structure?

we on the same page? lol

lol sajjad what did you mean pure meaning of multis? he had none..

can u give me feedback then of where i went wrong then?

[Rain Matrix]

well rhyming is doing something right, truthfully tha structure is okay but multi's please those are tha only thing u destroyed, it's okay to stay on a rhyme scheme but give it some passion, without meaning it means nothing

[C-Game]

yo Tornado .. im not sure if u know wat a multi means.. u didnt hv any significant ones...

if u know wat it is and u didnt use it den ignore this post