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Showin No Fear

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Showin No Fear

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 10th, '07, 21:03

over here im a soldier showin no fear
and im goin to cheer
after deployin more than a year

i joined with my peers
and stories we share
plus we're growin from glory
thru joy and thru tears

it was my choice to indure
the horror which steers
towards us
i destroy what appears
with force when too near

cuz i enjoy this career
to a point but it's bare
cuz my voice i should air
im not a droid is that clear

im a boy who's prepared
when poison impairs
focus - repairin broken
like tares n holes open, i cure

but most wouldnt care
cuz on this road im so rare
they don't notice to stare
im only their bro thru the mirror

to dispose all nightmares approachin our stairs,
im opposin my foes til in the soil the soul is exposed to premeir
to the devil below them, level zero comes closer, you know it i swear
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Showin No Fear

Postby cellphonesweetheart » Oct 5th, '07, 08:27

i really like the deep emotions in this piece :)
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