my credits due, my respect is too

[JMG]

watch me abuse the words its gonna be annihilation
but they move in herds and in my mind there racin
when there not hybernatin it feels like a dryer shakin
or a fire station when the sirens statin theres a fire ragin
and there flourishin so my pen gives birth to twins
and there murderin every verse there in
and my ink is alone its so for real and astoundin
in a league of its own with a force field surroundin
so aint no body touchin it like the ark of the covenant
goin so hard i am crusin it and im just startin the punishment



move in heards= rhymes
hybernatin=writers block
pen gives birth to twins=multies

[Rain Matrix]

this was a damn good drop
so I must give props

[JMG]

thanks man

[Tash8]

i'm not feelin the structure of the lines and rhymes but you had nice multis, flow was fine, umm yea pretty cool, but the rhyme structure was bad.

[JMG]

n e better

[patwivo]

that was the shit
i give it..

[JMG]

thanks homez

[4D]

Good post man, enjoyed the metaphor's and wordplay, nice multies good vocab, strructure was a little off as Tash said, but it didn't ruin it for me. Liked it!!

[Tash8]

much better, structure showed imply how you would rap it.. and that tyo me sounds a lot better.

great job on it

[JMG]

aight thanks i really appreciate it

[4D]

No probs man, put a comma after Due in your title, that title is only making sense to me now.

[JMG]

[4D]