Rain Versus Enimee

[Rain Matrix]

3 bars, 6 lines

I'll drop first in a lil bit

[Rain Matrix]

ya null and void, u'll get ya skull slammed boy, target down a lifted mission
it's time ta fight no signs of life, I'll grind ya bytes like assisted living

he's no foe, he can't even throw blows, so u'll see my guns empty crush tha noob
like someone snorting pills, it'll be a boring kill if this young mc busts a move

enemy, be tha end of me, he'll get jacked up like cable costs, cuz of fatal flaws
I see u've dropped beaten, not breathing, u've stopped bleeding, tha meno pause


*grind ya bites, text is done on computer, food broken up so someone can eat
*meno means music, menopause is when bitch's stop bleeding

[Enimee]

man ill fuckin beat yo flesh me im made of metal whore
ur pathetic u make me laugh with ur punches and weak medaphores

ur a fuckin weak human me im like a god damn martian
ur the equivilent to a gay text battler wit chicken pox and parkinsons

man just stop you cudnt beat me if i gave u a club to do it with
if your hair was more fair youd be the closest thing here to a stupid bitch

[Enimee]

VOOOOTEE!!!!!!

[Enimee]

bumpity bumpity

[J Roc]

structure:Rain, enimee you should take a few minits to fix yours, you throw away this category every battle you have

flow:tie, the way i read it, both were good

multies: Rain, both had some but Rain was more consistant with them imo

rhymes: Rain, better multies

punches: tie, enimee came more agressive with his and got better the second half, and Rain had the witty ones like the meno pause and grind ya bytes

vocab: enimee, parkinsons was the most complex word of the battle

nameplay: Rain..."enemy"....enimee never even mentioned Rains' name

complexity: overall Rain came more complex

other: eh, Rain

lately both been gettin better, but Enimee, both structure and nameplay are important in your drops, but i seen erry battle you have you throw both right out tha window, you should work on it next time, ya know? but this time my vote goes to Rain

[C-Game]

FLOW - Enimee
STRUCTURE - Tie.. both had a similar strucutre
PUNCHES - Enimee
MULTIES - Rain
RHYMES - Rain
VOCAB - Enimee
COMPLEXITY - Rain
NAMEPLAY - Rain
OTHER - i enjoyed rains more....

rain got this one imo

[IceAxe]

Structure: tied
Flow: tied, both were good
Punches: enimee
Multis: rain
rhymes: rain
vocab: enimee
complexity: rain
nameplay: rain
other: rain, more enjoyable, better metaphors

rain on the vote

[shady4life!]

Structure: rain
Flow: rain
Punches: enimee
Multis: rain
rhymes: rain
vocab: enimee
complexity: rain
nameplay: rain
other: rain, more enjoyable, better metaphors

ye that was pretty good for the both of u especially u Eminme that was pretty good, but it was too easy and not complex enuff, ur rhymes were always at the same places, but the more rhymes u hav the more enjoyable and catchy it is to read it. U shud really work on ur flow and addin more rhymes, but i hav to say that rain has beaten u and u hav lost....(again )

[Enimee]

good battle thanks for the votes guys ill take that loss no issue cuz u notice i got a vote from each of them in the puinches cat and thats what i focused on so good job rain