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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby Curtis » Oct 9th, '07, 01:08

lostdaze18 wrote:I just wanted to leave a comment to tell you how much this really means to me, every line holds a memory of good times that I will never forget. You are an amazing person and i couldnt have asked for anymore. ~I love You ~

:confusion: WTF
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 9th, '07, 01:23

lostdaze18 wrote:I just wanted to leave a comment to tell you how much this really means to me, every line holds a memory of good times that I will never forget. You are an amazing person and i couldnt have asked for anymore. ~I love You ~


thanks a lot babe

love you too :flower:
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby Curtis » Oct 9th, '07, 01:27

stevethetruth wrote:
lostdaze18 wrote:I just wanted to leave a comment to tell you how much this really means to me, every line holds a memory of good times that I will never forget. You are an amazing person and i couldnt have asked for anymore. ~I love You ~


thanks a lot babe

love you too :flower:

Oh..now I get it.
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby Tash8 » Oct 9th, '07, 01:44

Curtis wrote:
stevethetruth wrote:
lostdaze18 wrote:I just wanted to leave a comment to tell you how much this really means to me, every line holds a memory of good times that I will never forget. You are an amazing person and i couldnt have asked for anymore. ~I love You ~


thanks a lot babe

love you too :flower:

Oh..now I get it.


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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby Enimee » Oct 9th, '07, 06:57

good job steve....


and can i ask why it seems steve gets more responses and feedback then other writers? seems a little bs to me we got people droppin like 5 times a day and barely anyone noticin just cause doods got friends dnt mean he needs to be the only one gettin feedback its like damn this aint no popularity contest if your gonna check out ppls shyt then look at every bodys not just one persons...and stop havin convos in people topics use pm its there for a reason....................................................................... :whistle: :whistle: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :tounge2:
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 9th, '07, 16:25

Enimee wrote:good job steve....


and can i ask why it seems steve gets more responses and feedback then other writers? seems a little bs to me we got people droppin like 5 times a day and barely anyone noticin just cause doods got friends dnt mean he needs to be the only one gettin feedback its like damn this aint no popularity contest if your gonna check out ppls shyt then look at every bodys not just one persons...and stop havin convos in people topics use pm its there for a reason....................................................................... :whistle: :whistle: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :tounge2:


thanks man and yeah i agree one hundred percent with you on that :y:
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby C-Game » Oct 9th, '07, 17:15

Enimee wrote:good job steve....


and can i ask why it seems steve gets more responses and feedback then other writers? seems a little bs to me we got people droppin like 5 times a day and barely anyone noticin just cause doods got friends dnt mean he needs to be the only one gettin feedback its like damn this aint no popularity contest if your gonna check out ppls shyt then look at every bodys not just one persons...and stop havin convos in people topics use pm its there for a reason....................................................................... :whistle: :whistle: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :tounge2:



good point man.. i try my very best to feed all but im off creative writin these days coz im dead busy.. if some one request me i never fail to give honest feed on it..
ill try to get on more and feed...
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby Tash8 » Oct 9th, '07, 22:01

Enimee wrote:good job steve....


and can i ask why it seems steve gets more responses and feedback then other writers? seems a little bs to me we got people droppin like 5 times a day and barely anyone noticin just cause doods got friends dnt mean he needs to be the only one gettin feedback its like damn this aint no popularity contest if your gonna check out ppls shyt then look at every bodys not just one persons...and stop havin convos in people topics use pm its there for a reason....................................................................... :whistle: :whistle: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :unsure: :tounge2:


well let's see, a few reasons, I respect steve and I know his shit is worth reading, same with 4d but i usually don't feed 4d because i mean i really can't criticize him... i feed people' shit i think that's worth feeding.
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 10th, '07, 03:45

yeah tash also made a good point too i normally only feed things that i think are worth feeding, and of those that i respect, idk lol

anyways save this for another topic :p
and bump :y:
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby cellphonesweetheart » Oct 10th, '07, 07:38

lostdaze18 wrote:I just wanted to leave a comment to tell you how much this really means to me, every line holds a memory of good times that I will never forget. You are an amazing person and i couldnt have asked for anymore. ~I love You ~


i think its so cute to find two people this dedicated to each other, its great to see him write to her and for her to appreciate his work :)
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 10th, '07, 15:07

^ thanks :)






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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Oct 10th, '07, 15:27

finally read it :p

yea its very nice....like ur "methaphers" and some parts were nice too... :shifty: :y:
naw seriously nice piece of art there :y:
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Re: Crazy in love (finished, please leave feed)

Postby stevethetruth » Oct 11th, '07, 12:22

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:finally read it :p

yea its very nice....like ur "methaphers" and some parts were nice too... :shifty: :y:
naw seriously nice piece of art there :y:



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Re: 26 lines

Postby shady4life! » Oct 13th, '07, 01:51

Tash8 wrote:not bad, but have you stopped workin on multis?


yeah first thing i noticed...theres none. makes it too simple. But still its good. :y:
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