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Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby Curtis » Oct 11th, '07, 21:00

Every breath I breathe, every second I have
To be in the forum, wit young man, makin a post at least
In the basement, posting in peace, patiently waiting
To blow up and grow up, back and away from this forum beef shit
All of that should cease, cause I feel like quittin
Back to the factory, post for ME, when I feel like drinking
Go out and kill a clown a day, don't call me mavs no more
It's Curtis, I just threw TR's crown away!
It's only so many times, I could let my temper get tested
I can't handle it, I'll eventually get banned
I'm on the verge of doin some things, that won't help - shit!
Take myself away from my forum, is so selfish
I can't help shit, lately I been ignorin rules
You takin care of too many people, to go and lose
I do my posts and speak truely, without the influence of mods
Or these groupies in the forum, that wanna do me, nigga
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby $0 R3@L » Oct 11th, '07, 21:45

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yoshi wrote:even after all those years.. So Real > Jesus
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 11th, '07, 22:19

you wrote a peice about forum beefs and getting banned....cant say much for the concept man
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby chad08 » Oct 11th, '07, 23:12

haha fucking stupid dude
two black gun i dont know, maybe there magnums, i dont know what the fuck there called i just grab them
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby JMG » Oct 11th, '07, 23:35

yeah its hard out here for a forum member
JMG wrote: so are you gonna come fight me or not

Menzo wrote:No, I HAVE something to live for.
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby sinemm » Oct 12th, '07, 09:41

all i can say is:


















































:laughing: :laughing:

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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby James R. » Oct 20th, '07, 17:35

The structure was ass and the concept was bland. Nothing about this stood out. And the rhyming, when I was able to catch on, was plain and basic. More or less whack.
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby Tash8 » Oct 20th, '07, 21:04

am i the only one who understood that this was a joke?
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby James R. » Oct 20th, '07, 21:10

It was like a bad joke though
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby Tash8 » Oct 21st, '07, 01:42

James R. wrote:It was like a bad joke though


yea it wasn't funny at all.
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Re: Oh yeah! *curtis*

Postby Curtis » Oct 21st, '07, 02:17

Tash8 wrote:
James R. wrote:It was like a bad joke though


yea it wasn't funny at all.

Iit wasnt really a joke :unsure:
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