would be futuristicle fused upon me ad use the on suite
delete the peeps that i meet ad make them weep at there feet
would a really have to greet the poeple who mis-judged me
who really didnt beielve i had the ink-smudged page
as much as the rage wants to explode i turn to the pen
and its then that i know its bewstowed in my heart
if you decode from the start you'll know the message
is forebode smart like i presage the rest see we stage to test
the time i personel contest witch is mine a will not rest till a find
my name with the best of the rhyme
somehting i was writing, just thought id post see what ya'll think
) "Presage" was nice, I hadn't heard that one before. Nice multies too man. Structure was a little dodgy though Bar, whenever rhymes are ending midline it needs work in my opinion.
i go to remember to spell check.
