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Practice

Postby James R. » Oct 20th, '07, 17:39

No topic or anything. Just some stuff I wrote up in a few minutes.

I’m a classic like I’m writin from a cryptic age I rip the page
I split the page every single time I spit this rage
I’m quick wit blades and I’m just as sick as syphilis aids
You hit the maid and fucked her til her clit decayed
My mind’s demented & my nine’s relentless
Take my mindless senses divided by my time repented
What’s the solution? Nothin you’re just stuck with pollution
Why do I do this? Just because it’s fuckin ammusin
I’d say I’m something like Soviet Russia with a fuckin mic
Killin anybody but you feel me cuz my stuff is nice
You’re tough and tight, sike, I know that you’re just bluffin right
You can’t touch I’m like ready stomp you into nothing twice
You can’t even feed your kids but you say I’m pathetic?
I can’t deal with all these sweet ass rappers like I’m diabetic
I fly to heaven words touchin deeper than 9/11
I’m the fuckin king at five foot seven I’m fryin peasants
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Re: Practice

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 20th, '07, 18:17

You are a God amonsgt Men.
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Re: Practice

Postby James R. » Oct 20th, '07, 19:55

Thanks man. Uppin more feed.
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Re: Practice

Postby Tash8 » Oct 20th, '07, 21:03

ehh, wasn't near ur best but still nice
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Re: Practice

Postby James R. » Oct 21st, '07, 18:16

haha freestyles rarely are, but thanks for the feed
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Re: Practice

Postby 4D » Oct 21st, '07, 18:28

Fuckin Dope, I love the random shit. I`m all aboutu the rhymes, obviously it's more awesome when it involves a story and the rhymes are strong, but to me the rhyme is what interests me. That's' why a lot of my rhymes end up random shits. :happy:


You should do this more often man, it's easy reading for me, enjoyable! :smoking:
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Re: Practice

Postby James R. » Oct 21st, '07, 18:47

Hahaha thanks man. I do this type of shit more or less when I want to write but don't have a topic
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Re: Practice

Postby city » Nov 10th, '07, 01:44

that junk was mad hott son. give you props
Windows tintied on my ride when i drive in it
so when i rob a bank, run and just dive in it
so i'll be disquised in it
and if anybody identifies the guy get it
i'll hide for five minutes
come back, shoot the eye witness
fire at the private eye hired to pry in my bussines
Die b*tches, bastards, brats, pets
this puppy's lucky i aint blast his *ss yet

I'm a CRIMINAL

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