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a little something about the girl who never shared my love..

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a little something about the girl who never shared my love..

Postby polluted » Oct 29th, '07, 09:12

How can beauty be so cruel?
Is it love or is it a teasing game?
My heart is stopping, I need fuel
Not my body, my soul is feeling pain

Is it when I'm gone she'll condescend?
The feeling is so tender and so frank
She loves to behold my moral descent
Remains the vacant stare and life is blank

....

needs TBC....but I cannot continue...
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Re: a little something about the girl who never shared my love..

Postby Tash8 » Oct 30th, '07, 00:08

polluted wrote:How can beauty be so cruel?
Is it love or is it a teasing game?
My heart is stopping, I need more fuel
Not my body, my soul is feeling pain

Is it when I'm gone she'll condescend?
The feeling is so tender and so frank
She loves to behold my moral descent
Remains the vacant stare and life is blank

....

needs TBC....but I cannot continue...


it's atie, it's short and i never like the double line type flows

but if u add that bolded work, it make a multi
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Re: a little something about the girl who never shared my love..

Postby polluted » Oct 30th, '07, 04:52

Thanks dude... :y:
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