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MAXIMUM I Am Me

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MAXIMUM I Am Me

Postby maximum69 » Oct 30th, '07, 02:23

yo this is just somethin i wrote just wanted to indroduce myself i am just a aspiring rapper just trying to get his name out there however i can you know? haha got to keep the hustler spirit w/e here a joint i wrote check it out

Verse 1

In my life and from what I see around me shows indication
That its time we find some inspiration
Dam were all tired of being instigated
And being told if were not one way its eternal damnation
All we hear is that were worthless pieces of crap and
All we want is some respect in instead
Of the back hand, to the ing head
I can remember back when, I was young some one said
People of bled people have died
People are dead but its worse to be broken hearted
So I’m just like why do I feel so departed
Cause I walk this road in life
And I don’t see any hope in sight
So this is a song for anyone feeling alike
From the rape victims to the lost
From those locked a away and those that have been wronged
Its time to hold on to only we have when all else is gone
And that is the sound of maximum in this song

Chorus

We only got one life to live
So you got to keep trying do not give in
We only got this single opportunity
And we got to win rule out losing
Even when life comes at us shooting

Verse 2
Been cut across the throat and stoned
Been shoveled a load and cut so
That I can’t be resown and no one can save my soul
And yo I *** have dug my own hole
To be buried into alive
But yet I take and turn it into a rhyme
And so that it will go on into time
So that you can listen to me when you vibe
I made this for you all getting trampled on
For those tired of others that just ramble on
For the suicidal and the homicidal
For those who don’t give a like I do
And you *** wonder why I write you
Because I’m just like you
We are all in this together
So hopefully I can make this somewhat better
When you feel down in the dumps
Turn this one up and let the bass thump
And know this one thing “what”

Chorus

We only got one life to live
So you got to keep trying do not give in
We only got this single opportunity
And we got to win rule out losing
Even when life comes at us shooting

This song is dedicated to my friends
C.O., S.W., and A.P.

the shit still needs to be perfected so thats why tho flows off
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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