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i got know criminal intentions, that i know of
im just sitting in dention, about to go nuts
i lie girls down and rape them on benches, but so what
just looking at the governments intentions, make me want to throw up
and all i hear from my fellow penmen, is that my flow sucks
well why dont all you wenches, just grow up
and as i take over by inches, and just blow up ..........

cause i am a child of destiny, and dont you forget it
and dont mess with me, i will make your family my business
and all your freinds will be my enemy's, within minutes
i lack love and senseitivity, and mean know well wishes

i love you girl with ever fiber of my body
remember when you were the one that was sad you lost me
know im working harder for you then rocky
being in a relationship with you girl has been truely costly
but i keep on with it offering forgiveness
and begging you to forgive me for everything i did, i dont get it
we werent ever soppuse to be involved
but i guess like everything else in this life are relationship evolved

my shit is real my shit is ill
and everything my pen scribbles will
probably come back around like they were eliptical
my shit isnt literal im nothing in the physical
my raps are anything but typical

and us as poets are truely romantics deep down
everything for us is dramatic and and we always freak out
its like were in football and were past three downs
we writers live on the edge of the desk
we take the good turn it into a mess
but you put me through a expireince or a test
i will write it all out and leave all impressed

some lyrics for songs im writing each section is from a different song so leave feed back and let me know what you think