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song i have begun for a freind that lost her mom not done yet but let me know what you think

The quivering of her lips as the pain surfaces
The tears build up and fall from your eyes
And no matter how many are close you feel alone when you cry
When somebody you know dies there’s no advice
You just feel sudden urges to speak curses
You remember the good times and the bad
But it doesn’t matter they all make you sad
There are the feelings of happiness and gladness
There’s that feeling of madness and sadness
And all you can think is why did this have to happen
She was just alive know she lies in a casket
What has happened is so ing tragic
When somebody falls god is supposed to catch it
Well… let her be bathed in violets and roses
Let the angels sing into the wild as the casket closes
And is received by heavenly gates wide open

The thunder in the distance coming from the dark clouds
We stand together reminiscent pouring our hearts out
The rain hits the dirt, and all of the pain hurts
The devil has sang his curse yet remember these plain words

theres a chorus but its not finished anyway leave feedback