Steve Spag Forever.

[Steve Spag]

The point of this wasn't for the flow or vocab or anything. I know there's some lines in there that sounds stupid and Eminemish, but I just wanted to try this whole concept out.

Steve Spag is the best, never takin' shit//
Talk the shit that you want but you still won't hit//
Every time that you speak I get a little more sick//
Vengeance on my mind 'cause I'm just a big prick//
Even people who don't know me think I'm crazy as fuck//
Sometimes I wonder if they're right, am I a big smuck?//
Please no more games 'cause I will say those names//
Apologize after 'cause I'm stupid and insane//
Go straight to the cops and confiscate my cd's//
Fuck authority, minorities are running city's//
Oranges in my hand, I'll throw 'em at you like sand//
Right into your eyes, I'm doing work for Satan (say-tan)
Even every rapper knows it, this kid's gone loose//
Very stupid in the brain and I'll steal your Apple Juice//
Exactly what am I saying? Look at the letters going down//
Read it out loud, Steve Spag's Forever, what now?//

If you understood it right it spells Steve Spag Forever going down at the begining of each line.

Leave some feedback please

[Steve Spag]

Wow good eye, even I didn't notice that, lol.

Really scared me for a second, lol.

Thanks for the feedback though, glad you liked it.

[SajN]

Yeah . Nice verse.

It was cool with that Steve Spag Forever line going down...

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very slow starting and the first couple of bars were way below your usual standard imo

Steve Spag is the best, never takin' shit//
Talk the shit that you want but you still won't hit//
Every time that you speak I get a little more sick//
Vengeance on my mind 'cause I'm just a big prick//

they just werent very good to generic

it got better though, rhymes and flow starting coming into it more

Please no more games 'cause I will say those names//
Apologize after 'cause I'm stupid and insane//
Go straight to the cops and confiscate my cd's//
Fuck authority, minorities are running city's//

that wa smy favourite part and the bolded was the best part in the peice

i think this is below you though, nice ending though with the steve spag forever that was kool, but overall it wasnt to creative, especially since youve been posting a far higher text standard of late

[Steve Spag]

Well yeah as I said I know it's not exactly a good verse, lol, I'll admit that. The only reason I tried it out was for the concept, lol. Obviously not something I usually do, but I'll be posting some new stuff either some time tonight or tomorrow, back to the usual way, lol.

Thanks much