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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 9th, '07, 02:50

this is for the one girl
i love with all my heart
and from the very start
i knew we'd never fall apart

everytime i see you i never wanna leave your side
and i promise i'll love you till the day i die
no lies, you know what i hold for you is great
it's like fate never lost trace or got displaced
or disappeared in the mix so quick took a split
these pricks just envy of what i have they ticked
they can't admit i got the best their is it's odd
for once i hit the top and have yet not to stop
we combined so fine i want to never hit rewind
you are worth it in these eyes of mine is this a sign?
your perfect above and under the surface (you knew this)
there's no other way to word it but we both deserve it
the first time we kissed god i was so nervous
no doubts i want to shout without you i'd be so hurted
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Re: new lyrics

Postby city » Nov 9th, '07, 03:27

that was pretty sick son keep doin yo thing man
Windows tintied on my ride when i drive in it
so when i rob a bank, run and just dive in it
so i'll be disquised in it
and if anybody identifies the guy get it
i'll hide for five minutes
come back, shoot the eye witness
fire at the private eye hired to pry in my bussines
Die b*tches, bastards, brats, pets
this puppy's lucky i aint blast his *ss yet

I'm a CRIMINAL

Best Eminem song ever!
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Re: new lyrics

Postby stevethetruth » Nov 9th, '07, 05:53

thanks man
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Re: new lyrics

Postby lostdaze18 » Nov 10th, '07, 03:05

i love these lyrics you are so good to me I love you :)
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Re: new lyrics

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 11th, '07, 19:39

That was really sick man. I liked a lot of the lines in there. Keep it up :y:
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