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Random Flow.

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 8th, '07, 20:29

Didn't write to a beat this time. Just some random thoughts I wrote a few days ago, lol.

I'll shock you with my flows and then I'll rob you 'cause I'm pro//
I'm rockin' with the hoes that were talkin' 'bout my nose//
It's big like my dick, I'm never missin', I will hit//
It's like I'm pissin' then I'll shit on these rappers, it's a gift//
It's a talent, I was blessed, can't you tell I'm so distressed?//
I got my talen's in your chest, and I am grabbin' for the breast//
Raps version of Cena, I'll hold the belt for too long//
You can hate me but I'm strong, and if you hate me you'll be gone//
Knocked out of the park, you can call me Barry Bonds//
Don't be scared, don't be alarmed, don't be parking at my yard//
I will shoot back bitch, no twist in the plot//
You'll be dead on the spot, I stole the wrist from your watch//
I mean the watch from your wrist, I won't stop for a ditch//
I won't drop for a bitch and your glock's full of shit//

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Re: Random Flow.

Postby city » Nov 9th, '07, 00:23

you son that was mad had especially the last 5 lines. give me instructions on how to make my own forum. cuz i dont know

haha
Windows tintied on my ride when i drive in it
so when i rob a bank, run and just dive in it
so i'll be disquised in it
and if anybody identifies the guy get it
i'll hide for five minutes
come back, shoot the eye witness
fire at the private eye hired to pry in my bussines
Die b*tches, bastards, brats, pets
this puppy's lucky i aint blast his *ss yet

I'm a CRIMINAL

Best Eminem song ever!
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Re: Random Flow.

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 9th, '07, 19:02

Haha, thanks much man. Glad you liked the new shit :)

Anybody else got any feed please?
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Re: Random Flow.

Postby SajN » Nov 9th, '07, 19:11

Nice drop as usual :y:
Nice flow, rhymes and pretty much everything :y:

Take a look at mine "Lots of thoughts", it's updated
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Re: Random Flow.

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 9th, '07, 19:21

wiked wiked shit steve
the thing was when i read it it sound like an acapella of some sort, no beat just raw rap, know wat i'm sayin?
last lines were ma fav man
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Re: Random Flow.

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 9th, '07, 20:26

u get better with every drop :y:
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Re: Random Flow.

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 11th, '07, 19:41

Thanks much guys. Glad you liked that peice :worship:
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