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On The Tip Of Me Tungue

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On The Tip Of Me Tungue

Postby maximum69 » Nov 2nd, '07, 02:05

Verse 1

many people have tried to mold him but the truths all i got so i told it
i looked up to rappers as soldiers so rap didnt find me i chose it
i have dated some that were younger and some that were older hung with nerds and heavy rollers
and i didnt even ing know it but it turned me into one of those deppresed heavy smokers
and i have been known as one of the boldest yet softests of those that have spoke it
yet you could say rap keeps him up at night groaning yet if you saw me you wouldnt know it
i do not look it but i am one of the coldest my finger tips have been frozen
so let me change the topic for a moment see once me and the girls get to gropeing
no one knows when there curtains are closing cause me and a girl arent over till i have spoken
cause its all about the dra****ou have all known it from the begining you bone heads
its all about us entertainers getting a bonus so that those hoes can phone us
yeah you all know this i would do or say anything to get my dough growing
and so i can afford a rolex and those s i can finaly go get
i remember once diddy boasted that ten years from then he would still run this show biz
yet since then he has been roasted and he no longer joking
well just know that i am just going for one G then i am golden
see i have seen to many promises broken and hearts torn open
i have been on each side of the totem ive been loved and insulted
i am done with this country and this globe and tired of everything being sugar coated
so its the dopest most potent of poets just showing his emotions since nobody noticed
till know that this poet has grown since his break down and explosion

Chorus

I always got another line on the tip of my tungue
the words are from my heart and pushed through my mouth from the air in my lungs
and no matter what happens theres more songs to be sung
i am that ill rapper that will always be a factor i am second to none
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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Re: On The Tip Of Me Tungue

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 2nd, '07, 15:01

good drop

tha rhymes were decent

a bit too many slant rhymes used I thought

but tha chorus was mega dope

so good drop
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Re: On The Tip Of Me Tungue

Postby maximum69 » Nov 2nd, '07, 19:10

Thanks for the feed back rain matrix


Anyone Else ??????
I dont claim to be one of the top ten best
but ever since ive been spitting out raps like a printing press
people all over that heard it have been impressed
you just dont relize i am a godsend you have been blessed
with a living breathing rap printing press
so say what you want to but you know i am the rest
my s so complex with interesting depth
and it keeps coming of my chest faster then a printing press
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Re: On The Tip Of Me Tungue

Postby Wallace » Nov 12th, '07, 23:23

Thsi remember me "from da tip of my tongue", Twista's song. Cool rhymes :8)
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